All Comments on 'A Thunderstorm Never to Forget'

The author says that someday she may be able to share more of herself in her stories... I hope so. Something in the writing of this submission made me feel I was beginning to know, and to like her.

I love non-consent but that story left me feeling dissatisfied. She had never been fucked in the ass so that huge man certainly wouldn't have been able to simply thrust completely in her ass, it would have been hard work without the lubrication. Which also means that no matter how aroused the woman was, she would still have felt an extreme amount of pain. Perhaps you should have made it a dream sequence... everything happened when she was sleeping.

I really appreciate your comments. The support is great and criticism, as long as it is constructive, is always welcome. Thanks for reading and voting and taking a moment to tell me what you think!

Always,

cyn

writing form was special, it must have been hard to keep that form. But it worked great.