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Picture is wonderful
Words ring true, but ya need to edit!
as if your floating
lightly down
should be you're
Some men live to write...Some men write to live..
You Arthur do both. Your talents are always stretching never satisfied with what you just wrote. You stretch with a mighty need to keep writing.
Spelling grammer I am sorry it didn't take away the beauty of this poem. Some overlook the flaws because they aren't seen as such.
They are seen as Art's style. What a wonderful style it is too. Nothing distracts from his heart and soul when he writes from their depths.
Very well written my friend. Your art work blends a soothing beauty refreshingly enveloping the words. My friend
perfectly matching the written word with the flare of the pen..Beauty abounds.
great image
did you do it?
And it's paired with a very good poem.
thanks for sharing. :)
Blues groove.
Is there anything more enriching than the sound of a mellow blues guitar pursuing the elusive dream of every guitarist ~ to be in the groove. This rendering captures the essense of the feelings of a guitarist while playing ~ the blues.
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Your words float on down so smoothly, like the blues.
THE TRUE BLUES EFFECTS
and affects in various ways. TK U MLJ LV NV
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