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Nonconsent.
As a noncon story this gets a 4 .
As a bdsm story it gets a 0.
So this is it?
Seriously, even as noncon it's a barely 3.
As for BDSM, absolute zero.
What Is Wrong ...
.... With the author! Wrong category!
A good first chapter. Hurry up and write the next one, I'm eager to see what happens next.
Wonderful intro
Some people seem to be impatient. I think this is a wonderful start and am very curious to where it may lead.
Hmmmmm, an interesting intro
Not sure why people are bitching about the category. The story so far really doesn't meet any category, although it did touch on a couple. It was just an intro (at least it looks like it to me). Will have to wait and see how it develops. Guess, I am just not one of those that demands instant gratification.
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