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by Anonymous

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by 06/21/04

LOL

I'm hungry. I could murder a pie (NOT creamed one).

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by Anonymous06/21/04

What's Cookin'

Great start. I look forward to your next chapter.

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by Anonymous06/21/04

Great start!!

This is a great start. With the secret spice the Chef story can go anywhere. First start with the family and then go to the restaurant.

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by 06/21/04

Woops!

Double commenting!

I thought it was rather good, in under stated sort of way.

And I *hate* goofy teenage stories as well as mind-control category.

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by Anonymous07/26/04

Make More !

When is part 2?

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by Anonymous09/06/06

LET US SEE MORE

MAKE YOUR FAMILY STRIP EACH OTHER AND GET AN ORGY GOING, EXPAND IT WITH OTHER MEMBERS SUCH AS COUSINS AND THIER PARENTS. THEN DRUG THE ENTIRE RESTERAUNT STAFF AND COUSTOMERS FOR AN ORGY. LOTS OF VIRGINS PLEASE!

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by Anonymous09/16/08

loved it

hurry with the other parts i can't wait to read them

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by Anonymous01/18/11

More

I want to know what else he wil do. This is a great story so far.

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by Anonymous10/17/13

In need of a sequel

I can't wait for another chapter

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