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Yay for a dark fantasy!
I appreciate a story that has a darker thrust to it, as these seem ever rarer in the spirit of political correctness, as if we have trouble distinguishing fantasy from reality. Thanks!
Excellent story
You didn't hold anything back and treated it as a true rape. I still recognized it for the fantasy that it was and was quite aroused as a result.
Gripping reality
I do hate reading an intensely nasty story that ends with a complete cop out. Not this one! Reality, no matter that it came from darkness, was sustained throughout.
fantastic!
It is so great to read a story that doesn't end with the girl liking it and the guy. A real gritty fantasy that ends as it should and really feels like a rape but with an underlying knowledge that it is fantasy. These stories are rare. Write some more!!!
you wanted it
dressed in aslutty dress and not getting fucked in a while what do you expect bitch? wel you got what you wanted and money for the clothes. No more dancing in the docks for you then.
Very hot!
A nice slutty story, told by a nice slutty woman...you had me hard throughout, even though I don't normally even finish stories like these. I like that there was no pretense of enjoyment on your part. So many try to make us believe they liked it, and it's just not believable. I can believe you WOULD like it, but you had the good sense not to proclaim it! Nice.
Fantastic
Nice to read a story that doesn't wimp out at the end. Nice use of obscene language too, guaranteed to get a girl hot - well me anyway!
YOU
I didn't read your story. But your photo is very, very good. You two are unbelievable! JJ in the States
Great!
Great stories from a very erotic, brave woman who also happens to be drop dead gorgeous. Wonderful!
me too
im a bi 44 male and would also like to treated like that by a group of men.
Ok but still too many I's
The problem is you seemed to know what you were getting into so why not flaunt it or conceal it.
Flaunt and you are a wild woman!
Conceal it and you are a devious woman!
Very good but
I loved it, its a fantasy of mine too, but i hate loose ends. where was her friend?
Stolen...
Great story! Of course I'd think that since I wrote it and even have a version of it posted here.
I always hated the fact that the friend who doesn't show up wasn't explained, too, but never bothered to go back and change it. In the end, you're meant to assume she was part of the plan. That he enlisted the friend's help to get our girl there.
I gave 5 stars...
... for being just what iI was looking for, a short stroke story that got me off.
Real life
Have had very similar quite a few times .... also when ultra horny I ahve gone looking for it ..... a super story
Pool of sperm.
I would have eaten her asshole out first before I sunk my cock in her bunghole.
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