The story takes you smack dab into the sexual frenzy but you can't help wondering if there was a previous chapter that was supposed to have been read before this one. And why the name "Mr. XX"? Mr. X alone would have me wondering BUT Mr. double x?? Anyway, it is obvious that the two characters were ceasing an opportunity that they both had been longing for quite a while and that comes across with no problem. Good story but it makes you long for a before and a after (the sex between the characters are hot but it feels unfinished).
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The story takes you smack dab into the sexual frenzy but you can't help wondering if there was a previous chapter that was supposed to have been read before this one. And why the name "Mr. XX"? Mr. X alone would have me wondering BUT Mr. double x?? Anyway, it is obvious that the two characters were ceasing an opportunity that they both had been longing for quite a while and that comes across with no problem. Good story but it makes you long for a before and a after (the sex between the characters are hot but it feels unfinished).
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