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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/02/04

Married?!

I liked this story a lot, though I did feel it would be more appropriately put in the nonconsent section. But the end baffels and frusrates me, is she marrying him because she wants to? because she feels she needs to? for the money? the baby? what about adoption/abortion? how could she develop feelings for him after he raped her? so what if he made her cum!

~daisy~{M}

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by Anonymous11/28/04

I Agree with Daisy M on this one

The story has some good sex in it, but a the previous commenter stated, there is definitely something baffling about it. While it's a man's dream to have his own younger female lover, I find the power thing about secretly removing a condom to be a turn off. I also thought the idea of her marrying him as a result of the unwanted pregnancy to be pretty depressing.

A more enjoyable storyline for me would have been her beginning to enjoy the sex and the wantonness of being a kept woman.

Taumy

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by Anonymous10/14/05

I understand this...

all too well. Very nice submission in more ways than one. She married him because she fell in love with him - plain and simple. This could have been fleshed out more in words, no doubt. She seems like a natural sub. She did it for money and for the baby and for herself.

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by Anonymous02/07/09

fucked up

His slow dominance of her is extremely sexy but I'm disturbed by the fact that he lied to her about wearing a condom. That really offended me as a woman. What compelled you to include that int his story? Are you genuinely against reproductive rights or do you just see his impregnation of her as the height of her submission to him?

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by amarts05/08/10

more details

the story could have been more fleshed out, but I still liked it.

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by Anonymous05/26/10

Good story. Nice to see a little romance, aside from just pure lust common to most stories here

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by Anonymous07/17/10

Crappe.

I was once in a similar situation and you so vividly captured the emotions.

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by kuroukiphoenyx02/21/11

one word...

wow.

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by kuroukiphoenyx11/28/11

i was traced back to this story and saw my previous comment

My comment is still same...wow

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by Anonymous11/28/12

Hannah's Good Fortune

Hannah is in a good place now. I'm glad the story turned out the way it did. David is married to the woman he has always loved. Hannah is loved and well taken care of by her husband. Now she can be a loving wife and mother. Her relationship with David has probably deepened and she is no longer reluctant to have sex with David. He is now her husband and she probably spreads her legs with joy when David enters her pussy bareback.

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