All Comments on 'A Family Friend'

I liked this story a lot, though I did feel it would be more appropriately put in the nonconsent section. But the end baffels and frusrates me, is she marrying him because she wants to? because she feels she needs to? for the money? the baby? what about adoption/abortion? how could she develop feelings for him after he raped her? so what if he made her cum!

~daisy~{M}

The story has some good sex in it, but a the previous commenter stated, there is definitely something baffling about it. While it's a man's dream to have his own younger female lover, I find the power thing about secretly removing a condom to be a turn off. I also thought the idea of her marrying him as a result of the unwanted pregnancy to be pretty depressing.

A more enjoyable storyline for me would have been her beginning to enjoy the sex and the wantonness of being a kept woman.

Taumy

all too well. Very nice submission in more ways than one. She married him because she fell in love with him - plain and simple. This could have been fleshed out more in words, no doubt. She seems like a natural sub. She did it for money and for the baby and for herself.

His slow dominance of her is extremely sexy but I'm disturbed by the fact that he lied to her about wearing a condom. That really offended me as a woman. What compelled you to include that int his story? Are you genuinely against reproductive rights or do you just see his impregnation of her as the height of her submission to him?

the story could have been more fleshed out, but I still liked it.

Good story. Nice to see a little romance, aside from just pure lust common to most stories here

I was once in a similar situation and you so vividly captured the emotions.

wow.

My comment is still same...wow

Hannah is in a good place now. I'm glad the story turned out the way it did. David is married to the woman he has always loved. Hannah is loved and well taken care of by her husband. Now she can be a loving wife and mother. Her relationship with David has probably deepened and she is no longer reluctant to have sex with David. He is now her husband and she probably spreads her legs with joy when David enters her pussy bareback.

I love your stories and how you describe a man pumping his semen into you. Very erotic. Please write again soon! From a Canadian now living in Australia.

Glad to see Hannah married to Dave now she can spread her legs for him and have bate back sex with him for the rest of her life

Great story. Erotic but needs finishing. Hannah's thoughts about her inevitable pregnancy as she was forced to surrender to a weekend sex could have been written about. What were Hannah's thoughts when she found out she was pregnant.What are her thoughts about marrying the father of the baby she is carrying on her belly

What are her thoughts of her impending childbirth and becoming a motherF8E8

The only disappointment was Dave using a condom. Dave should have insisted that Hannah have bareback sex with him from the beginning. Hannnahs surrender to his wishes and her impregnation would be a sign of her submission to him

Unlike some of the other commenters I love the way Hannah submitted to David and then got treated to a surprise insemination! Awesome and powerful stuff right there and judging by the less approving comments you touched a nerve. Very good!

This has been a favorite of mine for years. I would love to see the rest of that weekend written, and the rest of their story from that to her being pregnant and married.

Please write a sequel!

interesting

A loveless, sad tale.