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shopping list: aisle 7

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by Tathagata06/15/04

I have

a friend who says when she shows up at the cashier with her " odd collection" of stuff she always gets a strange,accusing look.
I may have to send her this poem.
I love this
I'm never going to look at what's in my basket the same again.
Very clever, very sexy, and written in your unmistakable style
Thank you

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by tungtied2u06/15/04

A n observant shopper

knows a bargain when they see it. Once you start along this aisle it hards to stop until your mind is overloaded and spilling out the sides. Thanks Seattle. I've learned some new tricks.

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by tarablackwood2206/15/04

Oh...

...you precious, naughty angel. This is one to cherish!!!

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by flyguy6906/15/04

Beauty deeper than skin

I wanna spend a whole day in your spa, Seattle!

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by echoes_s06/15/04

LOL, you are bad

can I take you home to play? *grins* Great imagination and work here.

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by fawnie06/16/04

omg!!

teasingly delicious..
this was so fun to read..i'm still grinning..
shopping aisle 7 will never hold the same meaning!!
~grinzzzz~
wonderful piece hun!

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by 06/16/04

Opposite

to what every one else has mentioned Seattle, I think the Shopper's POV makes for a creepy read that pulls you in. A definite dark erotic ?much enjoyed!

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by hippiedude06/22/04

So that was YOU

I saw on aisle 7! I knew you were up to something devious. There is just too much sinister delight in this imaginative piece -- I love it!

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by Anonymous02/15/13

fantastic

arousal at its finest

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