After Party Gone Awry

for me a little discombobulated

maybe too early in the day... need to expand and describe with more detail...3

a new baboon......

of course 1*

yeah

and 45 s open up an awful big fucking hole in his fucking head
Rape requires murder doesn't it. A one for poor imagination

Denial

Another repressed homosexual fantasy. Obsessed with dicks. Denial isn't healthy! Admit you're gay and live your life.

The story is trite and ridiculous and not sexy.

Grow up, little boys

Pissing contests, dick size bets, idiocy. Who would write something like this? What are you, 12?

C'mon guys

Voting is some kind of guide to newcomers about what to read first. If you are homophobic, you could rate every gay male story with a "1", yet it wouldn't be fair to other readers who may have a different sex view, and may like it.
1's and 2's should be reserved for grammar atrocities, lack of plot, incongruences as calling a character different names in the same story.
This story was grammatically correct, and easy to understand. If anyone shouldn,t like the concept of the plot (hating cuckolds or similar) , please dont vote, otherwise you're just a troll

Alpha turn Sub

Bullshit.
Cuck crap.

In Part 2

he gets revenge on them?

sounds like the marriage is over

This is not a story it's not even sexy

as well as the friendship

Really, a ridiculous story

Not much of a friend then, is he? To go after the wife in such a manner.
And, she's not much of a wife for that matter, either.
And, she's a reason why most honest parents (father's mostly) tell their sons that cheerleaders are OK to date & have fun with but, don't ever marry one.
If she were a real woman/wife and, had any respect for herself, let alone her husband; she would've grabbed Steve's junk, pummeled it and reduced him to a little whimpering penis pump using boy that he is.

The dude is a former athlete and much larger physically than Steve

but he goes all cucky and lets the nerd trash him and his wife verbally and physically? Just doesnt add up, so credibility score way low.

So the marriage died

The wife is gone, the husband shoots Steve and goes to jail for ever, Jasmine is never heard from again and everyone lives happily everafter... Don't you just love happy endings.... NOT!!!

you did say there were 13 and the girl 11 right, mentally at least

1* remember a 45 ends it all, and dead wives tell no lies

What is this shit?

The "Revenge of the Nerd"? This was written as pov of the husband, but all seems to indicate that this was the pov of the nerd, dreaming he had a cock with "the dimensions of a coke can in width, maybe bigger". Then and that proved to be the nerd's fantasy, the nerd imposed himself to a football player and said for him to fuck off! How's that for reality? Is it possible that the world is square? Is it possible that Clinton will be the future President? No? So this story isn't possible to happen too...

Another one written, just for fun to see how low a score he can get.

I don't believe anyone is THIS deficient, mentally. I think the author gets off on purposely writing the most deplorable story he can just to see how low a score and how many people he can piss off.

re: needyou200

I'm flattered you stole my line " ass wipe" If the shoe fits, wear it. Bonnie, what is it you hope to gain by bashing anons? You failed miserably the first time, really think you'll succeed this time? Every comment of yours, just earn the authors a one star rating. Do you really think they need your help? These slim sewer writers do well enough on their own. Don't think they need your help. Got that ass wipe?

I guess the "new baboons"

enjoy posting in LW. They get off on the humiliation and negativity. lol

please dont ever write anything ever again

you suck

lol

the ravings of a lunatic. normal fare for loving wives these days

Didn't Make Sense

This story did not seem to make sense. The shy guy was tormented by the girlfriend about her boyfriend/husband's cock. According to the story, the jock did not seem to torment him (it was the girlfriend). If she was a size queen, he should have done this before Jeff and Jasmine married. No sense

huh?

i thought she was a sizequeen her husband is bigger !
bigger = longer not thicker so her hubby won he had the real mans cock
minus10000 star it sucked!!!

wow

another author with an I.Q. of a turnip should get a great following from the sickos and the walking dead.

Just made little sense

Hubby longer, him thicker? Apples and Bananas! Wife is loser, dump her.

Speaking from a football fan's POV

In this story Jeff the narrator informs us he used to be an ex -QB , while Steve wasn't an athlete. To me , Steve definitely had a crafty and agressive linebacker's mentality. If this was transposed to today's NFL , the results would follow what would happen if all-pro Luke Kuechly blitzed hapless Case Keenum ( worst stats of this year's pro quaterbacks). Only in the end, it was Jasmine that got sacked.

My wife put the ruler to two cocks.

This story doesn't make a lot of sense but believe it or not, my wife was once the judge in a dick measuring contest. We were at a fairly wild party. Two guys show up who had just won a trifecta at the track. They had bought the ticket together and shared over $23,000. They were drinking pretty heavily and started arguing over who had the bigger dick. They ended up betting $5000 on who was bigger. They needed someone to measure them and they settled on my wife, Carol, who is a slim, attractive blonde with a very nice figure. Both of us said "no way" but decided she would do it after they offered her $1500.00 and a Macy's gift card. As you can imagine, we were all quite drunk. The rules were that she would measure their cocks but she would keep her clothes on and they couldn't touch her. The measuring was to be done in private. I said I would pick a room so I picked a first floor bedroom. I made sure the blinds were up a few inches so I could watch everything and make sure Carol was alright. She took the first guy into the room. He said she had to take out his cock and get it hard. She started to jerk him off and he said he would give her an extra $500 if she'd take off her top. One thing led to another and she ended up topless on her knees with his cock in her mouth. I was furious but I was also unbelievably turned on and my cock was rock hard so I did nothing and just watched. When he was totally hard, she measured him. He said that after she measured his buddy she was to come back to the room and finish the blowjob. The second guy also offered her more money so she ended up stripped to just her panties, down on her knees sucking his cock. After she measured him, he also wanted her to blow him later. The party went on for hours and each of them took into the bedroom three times where she stripped naked and sucked and fucked them. They even did a threesome with her. I, of course, watched everything. I never told her what I saw. She told me that she had gone too far and had jerked each of them off while they felt her up. She never mentioned sucking their cocks or fucking them. That happened 6 years ago and I don't think she has been unfaithful since. I still get totally turned on thinking of how slutty she was that night.

if this story was a horse

you'd have to shoot it for being this lame

The moral of this tale?

There's always a guy with a bigger cock and when your wife finds him, she'll dump your ass and go with him. It's that simple. (In Literotica.)

Doesn't deserve a comment...1*

Doesn't deserve a comment...1*

re: harddaysknight

Yep, you can find more cliches in loving wives than any other category on this site. Can't take them too seriously, just laugh them off. I do enjoy the entertaining comments, where else but LW can one get a good laugh. (signed ML)

Bullshit

-1

I kinda tend to agree that it is Literotica after all and these are just stories for entertainment. The reader judges for himself.

The latest in Alt posting

Well , did poking the Ferrets make you feel like a big author ? Lol , you couldn't even write one of those little "Golden" books from my youth . Just too funny .

Didn't win

Jeff was bigger and should have won the tickets, girth is different than size. Also their background makes no sense to how they are acting now.

Really?

I actually don't have the strong reaction to cuckold stuff that many do, but this one is just seriously lame.

100% Most ridiculous peice of shit I've ever seen on this site.

Seriously VictorCharlie, I can't imagine any scenario where you don't just end your sad and pathetic life. To have written this.. you have ABSOLUTELY NOTHING, and sadly, there is no way you don't know this.

Criricism

1} Ignore the abuse, 2} read similar stories by the better writers here 3} read this again and try to inject more emotion and drama thus realism.

Eh, not the best

Hey not the best but seriously not the worst ever written. People who tell you to die or thar you have mental problems are themselves the ones with problems and the lack of a life. I post as anonymous because until I'm good enough or brave enough to write for this site I don't feel I should be a member. Your obviously good enough to piss off some of the resident yokels, I disagree with two readers; first size does not automatically mean length so Steve would win on volume and second alcohol lowers inhibitions revealing hidden hostility between friends, desires in wives and restraints in the voyeur inside all of us. Again an OK first try.

The only truly fair way

to compare cocks is using the solution first devised by Archimedes. Length and girth are different so measuring the cocks is not fair. She needed to get them hard and stick them in a full jug of water to see which guy displaced more water. That guy would have the bigger cock. This requires some skill, as well as pretty sensitive equipment and is quite likely beyond the abilities of these characters.

Perhaps making a mold of both cocks and then creating life sized dildos which would be immersed in water would work better. It's important that these dick comparison's be done right so that she will be sure to savor, and favor, the truly larger cock.

some thoughts

trying to think of additional bets husband can lose to Steve.
resulting in long term wife ownership (and no sex for husband)
how about husband must forego masturbation for one week...and then endure watching Jasmine strip tease him and get pounded by Steve (others too?) without one drop of cum leaking from husband. failure = try again in 2 more weeks, then 3 weeks then 4 weeks.....all the while Jasmine stays with Steve.

why do I feel like....

in reality, she MIGHT have started to TRY sucking on Steve, but because of all of the alcohol she had drank, would most likely start to gag and puke, until she was one decidedly quivering, shaking and miserable UNerotic mess; much more in need of passing out in the shower than being in any condition to cuck her hubby. If Steve ups the ante from the "agreed to" BJ to a certainly NOT "agreed to" fuck? Jeff simply steps in and fucking slaps him around the head. What Jeff does NOT do? Sits there idly by, watching and stroking his dick along to the sound of his bitch wife breaking his heart.

I don't know why you would have to have the guy relate one of the worst nights of his life (his wife's betrayal), yet still add in to the story that he was jacking off during it??? Is this how he tells what happened to marriage when he tells his other friends, family, or even concerned coworkers? This stupid little literotica chestnut is overused and never plausible. The guy who MIGHT be jacking off during something like described has never been married, has no real contact with other humans, and just does match with any of the OTHER characterizations you had tried to put on Jeff. But then... to just slink off afterwards to Steve's room?
BAH.....
I hope you were going for SILLY,
but what you ended up with was just SAD!

Yanked his ass up

Snap her back into reality tell Steve to get the f*** out of my house he runs his mouth put my 9 millimeter between his eyes no cocky here, she protests tell her pack your s*** don't come home

HDK

That is truly brilliant. You made my day!

Cry havoc...

and let loose the dogs of war.

A main meal of cuckoldary with a side dish of humiliation was always going to stir up the comments and you certainly did that. On the bright side your score is close to 3 and you have forty odd definite 1s above so there must be some 4-5s from others who aren't willing to cop the abuse.

As far as the story goes it's fairly well written. I agree with an earlier comment that it lacks emotion. It's a bit bland, neither a stroker or a serious exploration of the conflicting emotions of the situation. Anyway that's my two cents worth. Above all, keep going and don't let the bastards grind you down. 3*

What a sorry posting!

What a pathetic author.

I hope there is a 2nd part?

I know if that were me...i would have grabbed my car keys and left the slut there. She could figure out her own way home!

re: needyou200

Talking about suck and swallow. I've got something to shove in your mouth to shut you up. lol

Congradulations

to the writer of this "story" for getting HDK and HIV to comment. Truly an accomplishment getting two Lit legends to comment on such a piece of trash.

1*

So stupid. Let's see so he is best friends with the star QB in high school yet he is a virgin in high school. Yet he has a giant dick. How fucking stupid does this sound. Let's be honest, the author had his girlfriend fucked bye the QB in high school and this is his revenge fantasy.