All Comments on 'My whole life...'

by StormyNite

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minsueminsuealmost 20 years ago
Have you heard the song "Somebody"

by Depeche Mode? This reminds me of that song.

Touching.

- Mindy

turtlefactoryturtlefactoryover 17 years ago
Exceptional

I hope you'll meet her

I read this again after finishing When You're Near Me

Simply fantastic.

takemyhandstakemyhandsover 17 years ago
Nothing could surpass this.

Thank you for this. I believed adults, men and women, should read this because it will help us to look into our hearts, find our flaws, and ultimate lead us to love our other half more every time we would think about him/her. I'm going to share this precious thoughts with my siblings and cousins. Thank you again for sharing this with us.

JeannaLynnJeannaLynnover 16 years ago
Beautifully written

I can see that was straigt from your heart. Some of the most beautifully written poetry are simply our hearts speaking out. I do hope you find your "Great Love" I hope we all do.

SyrsonSyrsonover 15 years ago
Sooo good!

The first time I read this I thought it was just OK.

Then I read the story connected to it... and I really understood the greatness of it!

Read and you'll be surprised.

Syrson

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
You are amazing

Wow. This is truely from the heart everything was what I had wished for my self

A love that will never end.

You read my heart and Many others. You are amazing

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
FAIRY TALES CANT COME TRUE

BUT YOU CAN CONTROL AN OUTCOME TO YOUR ADVANTAGE IF ALL SO DESIRE IT, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
nice

i really like this and i think its cool how you used it in your story when your near me :)

HlovestoreadHlovestoreadalmost 11 years ago
Beautiful

Your words were so beautiful and touching. I couldn't help but smile while reading. Your words were not only from your heart but from your soul. That's why it was so perfect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I hope your fairy tale will come true one day! :) sure you will find someone to love you with all her heart !

Sammael BardSammael Bardabout 10 years ago
Same Here man....

It captures some of my thoughts when I think about love and marriage. Good work. 5*.

Courtnicole1987Courtnicole1987about 10 years ago

Some of this is in your story. Best story ever.

AcionnaCorvusAcionnaCorvusalmost 10 years ago
^_^

You are amazing. I absolutely love your stories. And this...this is exactly how I feel a lot of the time about true love existing. I hope you find her.

LostPilgrim1964LostPilgrim1964over 8 years ago
Beautiful

Well-written and beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My Life

I read this and I wondered if these words were taken from my head. I hope to find a love like this in my lifetime

AFoolRushesInAFoolRushesInover 2 years ago

I wish I had found this earlier. The part about forgetting romance, the little, simple things, is something that I have just discovered that I have forgotten. I have much to be thankful for, and much to make up for.

I have to go; my wife is waiting to go for our together time.

Beautiful and heartfelt.

Anonymous
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