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keepem cumin
Love the stories
HOTT "but" TOO short
Wish stories lasted longer
Too short
8 paragraphs DO NOT make a story.
No build up, poor and insufficient dialogue and descriptions of sex are risible; not my type of story, at all.
Yeah boy!
You keep writin' 'em, and I'll keep readin' 'em...and givin' 'em 5's.
very good.. lots of detail
Thank you....... Bring on Zelda.. But please make your stories at least two pages. The good read goes by so fast. Thank you very much a turn on.. Wish you were my neighbor
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