The story was ok but then when it got to the part about Doug and his sister it got all screwed up. She tells him she wasn't taking their drugs, just pretending, but then she goes to school after the party and doesn't remember anything, but then Doug is going to LA and all of a sudden she comes out with the story about not taking the drugs and remembering her dad and Doug fucking her. Lost all sense at that point.
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WOW
Great story .......You could end it at the airport.But speaking for myself Iwould love to read more
yum
great plot, great characters. carl is just sleazy enough to be sexy. the scene in the hotel was golden. the airport was a great finale.
daisy
Incest with a real plot
Great erotic story. Hard to find good incest story with a believeable plot line. The sex scenes are well done and the taboo makes a great plot.
confused
The story was ok but then when it got to the part about Doug and his sister it got all screwed up. She tells him she wasn't taking their drugs, just pretending, but then she goes to school after the party and doesn't remember anything, but then Doug is going to LA and all of a sudden she comes out with the story about not taking the drugs and remembering her dad and Doug fucking her. Lost all sense at that point.
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