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great story
THAT WAS A GREAT STORY, THE REVENGE, THE SEX, AND I GUESS EVEN THE 'HAPPY ENDING' WITH THE FATHER AND SON...JUST A GREAT STORY. I'D LIKE TO SEE A SEQUEL TO GET BACK AT NICKY AND HEAR MORE ABOUT FATHER AND HEATHER'S ESCAPADES.
do it again!
I agree with the other comment, do a sequel and let us see how you take care of the possible blackmailer. The story was great and very hot!
More
Definitely need more. HOT story !!!
Great story
We all need more of the same.
Excellent Story!!!!!!!!!!
10/10 for details, well written and DAMN Hot story line lol
That was fantastic!!!!! ;-)
Sequel:
Loved it poetic justice write a sequel of how he handles Nicky. How his father handles Heather. And will you have him turn Sandra into a cock craving slut.
A Scorching Revenge
Hats Off to you man. Extermely hot story, written with the guile of Frederick Forsyth and the deatails of Sidney Sheldon. It's one of those stories which presents the right amount of detail and nothing extra. Would dilligently wait for some more such hot submissions.
Sensational
I have now read a few of your stories and have bookmarked your page of stories for future reading.
I have never felt compelled to leave a comment before now, this truly deserves two thumbs up for an excellent plotline and some really hot scenes.
Keep it coming, I can't wait to read the next instalment ( hoping )
Cheers
in3d
More revenge
Would love to see more of this story, maybe even just detail of the kid and submissive wife.
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