An Elegant Seduction Pt. 02

Exciting

Very good, very well written. A pleasure to read!

Agreed.

This story has grown on me during the reading of the first two parts. I think there is a lot of options the author can use to develop this plot as it moves forward. The characterization is strong and Lynne is a realistic person to identify with and we know much more about her right now than we do with many characters on Literotica at the end of the story. This makes it much easier for the reader to engage with character and enjoy the story, but then they feel as if the know how she will react in certain situations. If she comes across as inconsistent and confused (unless she is supposed to be by the situation) then the readers will lose connection to the story thread. Very good work so far. Thanks for posting this enjoyable and interesting tale. 5* so far.

An elegant beginning

Keenly awaiting next instalment.
Thx

Fantastic buildup. I can guess as to where it's going, but only broadly and the anticipation is killing me.

Those looking for a quick finish are going to QQ but this is shaking up looking like the sort of work I come to lit, hoping against hope, to find.

Interesting.

I'm really liking this series. I like the slow build up. Ok, I'm on to chapter three. I'm excited to see what happens.