All Comments on 'Schoolgirl's First Subway Ride'

Excellent story.

Omg! Your story was amazing! I love both points of view! A refreshing new concept that I haven't read in a while! Thank you for the orgasm.

Kisses,

Your school girl

This was one good orgasmic story

This story had me laughing out loud even as it turned me on !

would love a sequel!!

Without a doubt this is the hottest story I've ever read on here. I have it bookmarked and I read it over and over. Please write more you do this so well!

Wonderful story, and please ignore the haters.

They obviously fail to comprehend these difference between fantasy and actually living the events… or recalling g them from memory.

In addition they suffer from depression and erroneously seek to validate themselves by trying to force their morals and ethics on you,

Don't listen to the haters, keep writing.

"They obviously fail to comprehend these difference between fantasy and actually living the events… or recalling g them from memory."

You are the one who cant. Or you are just blind?? I really wanted to see how people were selling that kind of story. It turns out it really is a glorification of rape. With the author even advising to rape a young girl instead of a prostitute. That s not fantasy. that s acting on a fantasy that s wrong.

Did you recount this from memory

as long as men can recognize the difference between fantasy and reality, I'm okay with this story and others like it. it made me cum, as a female, so obviously I have no objections.

Loved it! Well written fantasy and it was like I was an 18 year old virgin again ;) didn't happen on a subway but it was written so well I could imagine myself there. :) Loved it.

haha, my hands are tingling after that orgasm, aaaaahhh~

Nice.

I want someone to take me on a subway like that <3

every once in a while I have to come back and reread this story because it just sticks in my mind. thanks for helping me out ;p

So hot

I understand Fantasy but reading these and some comments on other stories I do fear for peoples sick minds!

Interesting story, great concept, love the back and forth.

Where I could not suspend disbelief was the eagerness of the girl. And her ability to orgasm. She had no compunction about his entering her. She was not scared or nervous or embarrassed or anything negative. This happening would make a girl super nervous and she would fight a little. Popping her cherries would not be that easy. Especially her anal cherry.

It was too quick (short) and not enough of a real virgin's feelings.

However keep writing.

I loved it. 5 BIG stars. I think this was the 2nd time I've read this story, and it's a huge turn both times now.

I want a stranger to fuck me like this so badly