Sister Falls in Love with My Cock

Hot And Nasty****

Thanks for the read.

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"When I heard her mouth open". Huh?

loved it

more please, this road trip aint over yet.

What...?

Don't know whether to laugh or just be appalled.

Start

Very good start

Hmmmph

Love how the majority of fuckwit trolls are anonymous lol. I gave you 5, loved it....

More

hope this trip isn't over yet

Need more work on characterisation

I know this is a sex website but I think you need to spend more time on characterisation before getting to the sex. All I know about your main character is he has a big cock and he loves sex. It is sort of hard to be invested in a character when those are the only personality traits we are presented with.

To Percalize and Stratigize...

Is the sister more like Audrey or Marilyn?

road trip!

i love sneaky sex in car ride stories, and this one was great!

Mouth sound

Heard her mouth open...
You know, that subtle wet noise of a hungry, horny, wet, craving mouth that opens up to lick cum off of fingers, when you're 2 feet away and listening very closely.

To rushed

Good premise to the story just to rushed. I find these kind of stories are more intriguing when there's a nice build up and character development. Still a good story though, keep on writing.

Great story

Hope you will add an ass fucking later

Nicely done

We all just need the promise of following chapters.

Slight exaggeration,perhaps

Another story of a guy with a nine inch cock who just happened to wear silky shorts while riding in an SUV..
C'mon.... let's get a little real.... the average cock is just slightly less than 6 inches,according to medical experts.

All the way & more!

These 2 need to take it to the next level with full on sexual relationship. Sister will become so addicted to her brothers cock, that she'll do anything for it...even get pregnant!

And than the kicker, they find out their parents are really brother & sister as well!

And family that plays together, stays together!!! 😜

This is one of the best brother-sister budding sex stories I have read on this site !! Great potential, story details, etc. Hopefully, during their trip their parents will leave them alone for plenty of play time and when they get home too. Kirsten and her brother will hopefully; do a lot of oral sex and then Kirsten will get on birth control and ask her brother to screw her and that will become a daily after school routine. That they'll develop a love, caring and strong relationship that goes into adulthood. Cannot wait for another chapter or two. Thanks !!

Turn off

Nothing about this that I could get through fits a good story. For example--it's far too convenient the boy has a 9" dick, cums like a pornstar (most don't cum tons) and just happened to have a nympho girlfriend that had juicy orgasms. These things stereotype what we might like, but is far from reality. The biggest hits against this story: the sister isn't disgusted/doesn't protest when she first sees her brother watching videos; she immediately "loves" his dick because it's big (most women do NOT "love" any guy that's well hung JUST because of that; they immediately start a sexual relationship when the author frames this as a "distant" relationship and especially because he "stole" her best friend by humping her regularly. The informed reader would expect 1) lots of hate or significant animosity with his twin because they're not close; 2) having to actually build a relationship with his sister before she even starts seeing him as a love interest; 3) make up for that distance by apologizing and repairing the damage; 4) getting over the taboo and "gross" aspect of the sexual part; 5) slight flirtation and double entendres until we get some slight experimentation like light kissing and some petting; 6) getting more involved, with each thinking about one another and them getting closer; then usually finally 7) them giving in or trying it full-on.

The story basically goes to 7 with none of the intervening steps and goes to stereotypes immediately. What's the typical porn weakness? A woman automatically wanting a guy with a big dick! So this is far too convenient, which actually the title gives away, as no one can "fall in love" with a penis--one falls in love with a *person* and then the other parts of them follow quite a bit later. Will not continue reading (actually didn't make it past the first few paragraphs).

Summer move

Fantastic story . I hope you keep us updated when you get to enjoy her more

A good STORY!

A great, down and dirty sex story between an adolescent, horny, twin, brother and sister. I understand the comments of "needs more character background", and "needs a lead in to the sex", etc. However, I loved the jump straight into hot porno style sex between these two. Interesting suggestion about mom and dad being siblings, but having mom fall in love with the porn cock is good, or dad and sis getting in the act sounds good. And... I think you should stay with the "all about the sex" style of the story. Nof really looking for character development in this story.

Please dont stop

This is your first story then I want to read all you wright. Please don't stop

by Comentarista

It's called fantasy. It's made up, not real. What fun would I think Be with a tiny dick and no one wanting lot of sex. Don't read this genre if you want real life. 5 star loving this can't wait for next chapter

Redux

This is like reading a story I've read a dozen times. There are so many in here with almost exactly the same story line.

Even if it is fiction, the 9" and testes that shoot three cups every five minutes gets old. That is a personalthing, but then reviews are largely based on our personal tastes.

Boonis Glottious!

A bit too rushed but a good premise. However, a 9" prick, bucket loads of cum? Please, try to stick a little closer to realism. Then you lost me when they started having ass hole snacks. That turned it into a barf fest. If you find the taste of human feces to be delicious then you need to seek help.

great story

love it - part 2 please

Good Story

Get the MUM AND Dad involved.

Who cares

It's a good story and don't let the Grammar Nazis hound you. I hate how everyone is quick to talk about every single thing wrong with a story on here. The dick was to big and he came to much. Who cares. That makes the story fun. Who wants to read a story about a sister who saw his tiny dick and then said oh let me play with that. The whole thing got started bc of the big dick. So keep going man and don't worry about the assholes(pun intended). No one gets on here to read a boring story and worry about spelling.

really ? its same story every time when in a car with parents

they 'play' in car with his 9 inches(Wish all men were as lucky!! but as we know all men aren't created equal but it seems every bloke in these stories has 9" or bigger) & Sister just see the 9"s & can't help themselves Also they are conveniently(3rd row seat of our family SUV, watching videos on my phone of myself and my girlfriend having sex. My parents were in the front, and the middle of the car was piled high with suitcases, ice boxes, and junk for the trip) #Really

OK Losers..Grammazr Nazis is not even a real term.

I find it very disturbing that grown men in their late 40's who still live with their parents and do nothing all day except chat on social media and play games all day can find the time to criticize those who actually accomplish something meaningful like writing an erotic story. Go figure. Perhaps a bunch of us sane readers should bring out the pitch forks and take care of these idiots who do nothing but whine, complain and drags others down. This is one of the more inventive stories about a brother and sister that I have a ever read...truly amazing. And why are so many small penis folks out here complaining about the 9 inches? Sure mine is only 7.5 inches but it gets the job done. Perhaps these losers have a penis that is smaller than their pinkie finger. If that is indeed true then I can understand why they are so angry at life. They will never ever be able to have sex with a woman without having to use force. Sad losers..go away.

what

in the actual fuck did i just read? was this written by the author of My Immortal?

Part 2 please?

This was a rather refreshing story. It had a lot of similarities to other "backseat of the car ride" stories, but I like how it was just different enough to make it unique. Looking forward to more of the story.

Good story

Good story. Like the freshness of backseat style story. Can't wait to read more on this story of you intend to keep it going

great story will there be a follow up?

Loved the story line. Hopingvfor more

Are going to finish this

Thanks

I'm glad most of you enjoyed the story. I just write what I would like to read, so don't really care about the haters and virgins. This will be continued. Wanted to finish and submit a different non-incest story first. It's about shear yoga pants at the gym and some good old fashioned car fucking in the parking lot, and a slave girlfriend who cleans them up.

One question

How damn loud were Mom and Dad jamming that NPR not to hear all of that a foot an a half behind them?

& 6 month later......

The cravings got the better of us & we could not keep away from each other, Mandy who was after my brother, got jealous when she got wind of our activities, She did not want me share my brother she wanted him all to herself, so she had our activities uploaded on UgotPosted.com with a hidden cam.
Over a period of a few months the whole town came to know of our activities.

My parents were the last to know & they disowned us.
My brother felt so ashamed of all the taunts of the people, he just vanished, i Fear the worst & the police have not found his body nor have they had a report on him.

am 3 months pregnant & living in a women's shelter.
i cant go on any longer, i dont want to bring a child into this world that has no love for us.

if there is any contact from my brother, please tell him am sorry for taking my life & hurting his unborn child. he left me alone in a cold world. i tried my best.

Hope to see more!

You really hit your stride in the descriptions of enjoying each others asses....sooo HOT!

6 months later

Hahahaha! Now that's a happy ending!

Life is good.

My sister loves home made porn and big cocks, I got both, and our parents are oblivious.

Those parents are blind, deaf and/or stupid...

This is a great story, but it has quite a few holes. First off, why are the kids sitting in the very back? No one is occupying the middle seats. The only logical explanation for that is because some of their stuff in on those seats, but that makes no sense either. It would make more sense to fold up the back seats and put the stuff in the back, because's there's more room for their stuff to fit.

Also, the parents:
-Cannot hear anything other than the radio
-Can't just turn around to see what their kids are doing
-Almost never think to check on their kids, either in the SUV or the hotel, except when it's conveinent for the plot.

You have a good concept here and the sex scenes were hot, but that doesn't mean that the actual story is fine. Hopefully this is a good learning experience

*3.5 out of 5*

Good Story!

Hey, I really liked your story... despite the criticisms of grammar or character development - After all, This IS a Fantasy, right? And who hasn't fantasized about having a Big Dick or a Girl that loves the idea of a guy for his big Dick? It sure makes you feel appreciated when someone loves you MORE just because you have an impressive dick.

OH, and how did the parents not hear the kids? Have you guys ever rode in a big SUV? The more luxurious models have SO much sound proofing that you can barely hear a passenger talking in the 2nd row from the Front Seats, never mind trying to hear them if they are in the 3rd row seats - Even a radio played at low levels would drown out noises from the 2nd and 3rd row seats.

And the Cheaper base models lack so much of that sound proofing that the road noise and vibrations are amplified - THAT means you have to turn UP the radio just to compete with the noise for it be fairly audible. This is especially true on back roads and rough pavement. It's like being in a tin can fully of loose rocks. So FORGET hearing anyone talking to you from the back seats.

BTW... Would love to read a second chapter... perhaps sis showing her affections and appreciation for a guy with a big dick who knows how to use it to make her come and Come! :)

What A GREAT SISTER!!!!!

Ain't nothing better than a Hot, HORNY SISTER.!!!

For the anon below...

The kids are both over 18, why would the parents need to check on them? Lol. Hell, Ive been on vacations with family in a van and my cousin and I hung out in the back seat and fooled around some. The only time the adults up front turned around was if they were talking to us or wanted something out of the cooler!