A truly thoughtful wife to have the hot tub warming a load of cum for her husband's supper. Much more thoughtful than the wife who only served a crock pot full of chili.
by
Anonymous01/08/17
Anyone...
...who generates so much hate from Anony deserves respect.
Just sayin'....
...as an Anony...
by
Anonymous01/09/17
Just bad
Pretty much the whole point of writing in the first person is to know what that narrator is feeling. There is none of that here. He just does things without a thought, without a feeling. If you're going to make the guy this detached and this much a non-entity, write in the third person. In the first person this is god awful.
by
Anonymous01/15/17
Ideal cuckoldry, perfect wife
That's the kind of cuck I'd like to be and the kind of wife I'd appreciate.
Just feed me that first load then feel free to fuck her and let me eat the cream pie.
by
Anonymous02/07/17
That was good
I've never done this, I wouldn't say that I never will though.
English
take a gun too your head and fire
not even a man
Supper
A truly thoughtful wife to have the hot tub warming a load of cum for her husband's supper. Much more thoughtful than the wife who only served a crock pot full of chili.
Anyone...
...who generates so much hate from Anony deserves respect.
Just sayin'....
...as an Anony...
Just bad
Pretty much the whole point of writing in the first person is to know what that narrator is feeling. There is none of that here. He just does things without a thought, without a feeling. If you're going to make the guy this detached and this much a non-entity, write in the third person. In the first person this is god awful.
Ideal cuckoldry, perfect wife
That's the kind of cuck I'd like to be and the kind of wife I'd appreciate.
Just feed me that first load then feel free to fuck her and let me eat the cream pie.
That was good
I've never done this, I wouldn't say that I never will though.
Very hot story line
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