All Comments on 'A Reasonable Demand'

by Randi Grail

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TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
I'll

say it again

Yummy

Great rhythm, great phrases, wonderful passion

Thank you

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
i loved the rhythm too..

this is great randi..

delicious in content!

yummmmmm!

flyguy69flyguy69almost 20 years ago
"mouth clutching air..."

and mine is trying to catch my breath! I feel like this poem just gave me a handjob. Loved it, Randi!

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Thanks for this

Sweaty, hot, lusty fuck! It feels so good!

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
This...

...is blazing!! -- which is not easy to do poetically. Wonderful job, Randi!

KundalinguiniKundalinguinialmost 20 years ago
Absolutely

a reasonable demand. We all need it sometime. This is so hot you can feel the sweat. It's a wonder you didn't burn your fingers on the keyboard, Randi.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Very cheeky

"feed me Pavlovian truths

of pleasure peaks and pain

and I will heed to every notion"

Pavlov would roll over and sport a big bone reading this! Thanks. Much enjoyed ;)

lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
Yes, yes, yes...

Poetic and hot...I'm so jealous.

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