All Comments on 'Randi Comes Home Ch. 02'

by Rumple Foreskin

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doormousedoormousealmost 20 years ago
Best of luck with the comp

Another awesome display of your work ;-)

I'm glad to see this one continuing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Keep it coming

Too be continued ???? what a tease!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Type Faster!

Get out more chapters!!!!!

Rider8x5Rider8x5almost 20 years ago
A more than worthwhile effort........

Very well written, good exchanges between characters and fully described in a manner that takes the reader into the tale, rather than being just an observer.

Good Lord man, don't stop now!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Goood Job

One of the better B/S tories Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
An Artist come among us

Man, you are a pearl beyond price. Not only can you write a story that has your readers (this one, at any rate) up and eager for the next paragraph, but you can spell and punctuate. Your talents seem to be boundless. Don't stop, please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
this was great chapter 2

i read chapter one and just now happened to find number two by chance i had to read seeing as how the first one was so great cant wait for part 3 and ya you are good with the spelling and punctuation which is always a good thing

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Great Story~

Hey Rump, loved your tail, your words strategicly woven, well written, great Story...(*_*)GOOD LUCK!

cookiejarcookiejaralmost 20 years ago
Dayum Rumply...

Hot...hot...hot...Good luck!

cloudycloudyover 19 years ago
Whew!

I don't usually get into incest stories, but this one literally took my breath away, and had me squirming in my chair!

wishfulthinkingwishfulthinkingover 19 years ago
Is it suddenly hot in here?

Lovely story telling, cute bro and sis, and believable dialogue! I think you're on to a winner. Good luck!

KatLadyKatLadyover 19 years ago
Sexy . . .really sexy!

This is a really hot, really sexy story. They make a cute couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Lucky Brother

A great story. I would love to trade places with him anytime. It's especially nice that she is taking time to show how sex should work between brother andd sister. I am looking forward to reading more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Keep writing!

One of the best Bro/Sis stories i have read. Keep writing... your talent is amazing. Dialogue, descrption both physical and emotonial, along with grammer is great... keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Lovely family bonds 'erupted'

I am kind of strange in that I have always wondered what it would be like to have casual relations with my sister. This story filled my erotic urge and was a well-written short story also! Congratulations, O rumpled one!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
can all the family play?

we know sister and Auntie are horney.so fucking sister can lead to fucking Aunt?but moom must be lonely and horney too ? how about mother discovers her son with his Auntie and she approachhes Auntie for a chhance at her son OR she discovers sister and brother and hse gets daughter to help her get her son too solve her horeny needs?maybe hes tricked into it or ????

ihatesadendingihatesadendingalmost 4 years ago
Really well written

It's just so natural how they compliment and embrace each other.

Only if it were longer.

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