All Comments on 'Serving the Empress'

by Dutch_Erotica

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good

This was quite good. The seduction is rushed. Would like more reluctance.

GreyGrueGreyGrueover 7 years ago

I loved how you tried to show it as she was freeing herself, this Idea turned me on, maybe she had an Extreme longing for Freedom, but I'd like more if you had made her more resistible and show the conflict more in her Actions not just feelings.

All in All, Great one! Keep it up!.

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