Wow Jacqueline - You've managed 2 hits in a row ! :-)
I've loved both of them. You have a neat writing style and I love that you are a 'mature ' Lady - that by itself is a turn on .
A big appeal of the story is that you don't just lay down and take it but are very pro-active. ( The part where you slid your arsehole onto his mouth as he was licking you while you were riding his face ... mmmm just one of my favourite parts of your story, the big difference in your ages and so much more )
Please do keep writing!
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Anonymous01/12/17
Why
Why can't she just let her poor husband go! There is no way she has any real love for him because as wife h most prostitutes, she will get caught and or exposed. Just treat it like a bandaid and get it over with so she can continue until she withers away from diseases. Lol, I'm sure the clientele are so disease free and these are the only whores they are seeing. Don't have a problem with the profession but only dumb already diseased whore does business without protection, getting paid extrovert to catch something isn't a smart business plan unless you are already carrying.
of your first chapter; you seem to be straining a bit. Which is in no way to even hint that I am not enthuiastically awaiting more of your utterly titillating enflamed renderings. Kal
I couldn't wait and had to go ahead and read your second chapter. WoW! I now see why you got a (H) for this one. Congratulations! I voted five stars. Six would have been better but they don't offer that option on this sight. I love to read the musings of a 65 year old woman. They are so similar to mine as a 76 year old man. Please keep up the good work and enjoy your writing. I am sure that you do.
Loving the wanton daytime adventures of a mature woman. Beautifully written and constructed but would have liked it being a bit of a longer story to get even more pleasure out of it. Thanks for getting my lovely mature wife horny - perhaps you are giving her some ideas!
English
No Holes Barred ! :-)
Wow Jacqueline - You've managed 2 hits in a row ! :-)
I've loved both of them. You have a neat writing style and I love that you are a 'mature ' Lady - that by itself is a turn on .
A big appeal of the story is that you don't just lay down and take it but are very pro-active. ( The part where you slid your arsehole onto his mouth as he was licking you while you were riding his face ... mmmm just one of my favourite parts of your story, the big difference in your ages and so much more )
Please do keep writing!
Why
Why can't she just let her poor husband go! There is no way she has any real love for him because as wife h most prostitutes, she will get caught and or exposed. Just treat it like a bandaid and get it over with so she can continue until she withers away from diseases. Lol, I'm sure the clientele are so disease free and these are the only whores they are seeing. Don't have a problem with the profession but only dumb already diseased whore does business without protection, getting paid extrovert to catch something isn't a smart business plan unless you are already carrying.
Another marvellous chapter ...
... of this sexy sexagenarian's saucy doings -- I love this one.
Thank you so much, Jacqueline1951, for this lovely, believable, and oh-so-well-written tale! More chapters please -- five stars.
"T" for 2
Thanks for another "T"errific Part 2. I think you mentioned a third was already in and I'm sure you'll be 3peating us.
Lovely
You are coaxing her inner wanton essence beautifully to the top.
Very Good But Falls A Tad Short
of your first chapter; you seem to be straining a bit. Which is in no way to even hint that I am not enthuiastically awaiting more of your utterly titillating enflamed renderings. Kal
I couldn't wait!
Dear Jacqueline1951,
I couldn't wait and had to go ahead and read your second chapter. WoW! I now see why you got a (H) for this one. Congratulations! I voted five stars. Six would have been better but they don't offer that option on this sight. I love to read the musings of a 65 year old woman. They are so similar to mine as a 76 year old man. Please keep up the good work and enjoy your writing. I am sure that you do.
Jack jackcor69@yahoo.com
Hitting the spot nicely
Loving the wanton daytime adventures of a mature woman. Beautifully written and constructed but would have liked it being a bit of a longer story to get even more pleasure out of it. Thanks for getting my lovely mature wife horny - perhaps you are giving her some ideas!
Luverly
Dear Jacqueline1951!
You are doing fine and I'm enjoying it fully.
Lorencino (1947)
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