All Comments on 'Waking Up with a Friend'

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MrObnoxiousMrObnoxiousabout 7 years ago
GREAT

I'd give you a 4.5 if I could--my one and only objection is that I like hearing the begging, rather than being told she was. But, you have no dialogue anywhere.in this, so it works here. Great stuff!

thomas_deanthomas_deanover 2 years ago

Coming Together

Due to differences in the anatomy "cumming together" can be difficult when friends turn lovers and "come together," but they manage. Well told.

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