Five Years and Four Days - Day 01

Lovely story.

I'm all giddy for the next installment. I just love a good love story and this is already on its way there. Thank you careythomas.

waiting eagerly

For the next installation 😘
Love this story! Keep it up

Ahhhhhhh more!!!

go us hooked

absolutely love the story. more please. and soon

A very yummy chapter!

Very yummy indeed! The beauty is in the details! Thank you!

great

love it so far, looking forward to more.

Lovely

I'm enjoying this a lot

Really starting to love this ch 2 plz!!!!

very nice beginning

More like a romance than a lesbian story.

need more ASAP

Seriously hooked, can't wait for the next chapter

Hooked

I read much of but not all of the prologue. What I discovered reading this is how marvelous it is that there is a fully formed backstory. The raised eyebrows and winks are so much more meaningful when the reader understands a little. This is going to be one of my favorites, for sure.

Great Story

Well done, you are a very good story teller. Yes we all know where this is leading, but the way you have constructed the story and the detail in character development makes it even more erotic. Five stars and please continue quickly.

Wow,, love the details. You take the opportunity to give the details . For example, some writer would skip the details if two people were driving to dinner. Or they would skip dinner altogether and say something like" after dinner". I like to get into my

Excellent

pretty good

well, I can say that this is starting to read less like the harry potter stories, I am starting to really like this series and hope to read many more, also I guess Jess finally got the hint about how Alex feels about her

Excellent writing

Love it. I love how you portray the personal prospective of both of them. The details of their thoughts are very realistic and I love how it builds. You had me smiling to myself a few times while reading! Keep up the good work.

Great story so far!

And I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.

Great back story and build up!!

Hey Carey,

I enjoy how well you've captured the ageless dance of testing romantic interest in these two characters. Many thanks for being so thorough in your descriptions and development.

Looking forward to reading more of your fine work.