All Comments on 'Cyn'

for the phrase "slut within"...it just seems so at odds with the rest of the piece...overall, great work.

and "slut within" is perfectly acceptable and fits the person as well as the poem.

Syn

This was my favorite part:

Exquisite limbs and aching form

House the slut within

I'd rethink the cliche of lustful passions.