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I love this story and ...
I appreciate the short waits between chapters. 5* for every chapter so far.
OOOOOPPPPPSSSSSSSS
BEFORE I "RETIRED" THERE WAS A PRODUCT ON THE MARKET FOR A
12 GUAGE SHOTGUN..... IT WAS A "TASER" ROUND THAT COULD BE USED
IN A SHOTGUN...... IT GAVE YOU A LONGER REACH WITH THE SAME EFFECT
AS A TASER.......... YOU MIGHT LET LUCAS OFF HIS LEASH AND GO GET THE
PROBLEM CHILD............
GUNRUNNER
Not finished?
Is this story still going on? I check in every few chapters and nothing changes. All stories are the same. The author has good ideas. He can even make a technically good story. But it's primary reading. This reads like the x rated version of Dick and Jane. See Dick's dick. See Jane's cunt. Put it in Dick. Fuck Dick, fuck. Cum Jane. Good girl. Lke a first grade teacher decided to be naughty.
SOS (Same Old S***)
This started out as a very good story but now it has evolved into nothing worth reading. End this thing and write a story that says something.
What's up with that?
Why are there still people on here making the same complaints about the story that they evidently read? It's simple if you don't like it, don't read it. No one is forcing you! Some people's children.
Awsome series
Love the series even if the segments are short at least the are coming frequently. Keep it up at least until you find a great ending.
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