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Well done!
I liked your description of Louise very much.
Hope this goes further. I like big women.
Love large mature women
I love large mature women and your description of her is, indeed, very arousing. Even more description would be appreciated as men are definitely very aroused by the visual aspects of a woman's form. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Very good writing, but . . .
"Her body shape appeared to be somewhat pear shaped, with seemingly slender shoulders and medium bust . . ."
"I took advantage of the situation and let my eyes drop to her breasts. . . They were extremely large . . . "
Jaymie - -
Great read. Just a little nit pick. You originally described her breasts as a "medium bust." I was disappointed at first, because (IMO) the only saving grace for a plump woman is large breasts.
I was quite surprised, and delighted I may add, to find out they were actually, not medium, but "etremely large."
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