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It's a travesty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story is just too good not to have a better score... let alone no other comments, praise, etc. The author has created two delightful characters, breathed life into them in a simple yet perfectly intimate, romantic way. I don't often read stories these days, but once I'd started 'Undressing Tamara' I couldn't stop until I'd finished.
My unabashed compliments to the author!! The story most assuredly deserves your attention and the thirty minutes or so it will take to read it. I sincerely doubt you'll regret the investment of your time!!!! ~ AVL ~
Pretty good
I started reading this on my way to school, and I agree you did a very good job bringing them to life, I also liked the way u added the cat and called him Garfield I can only hope you will add another part to this, maybe after the baby is born and tamare gets to have her baby then
Excellent Story
I have to agree with Vixen and jenorma. Shaima32 has written an excellent story here and I loved it. I really liked Tamara and Anna. Their story was interesting and well-written.
I've read several of Shaima32's stories and I think that they are very well done stories, with interesting characters that, if they were real, I'd like to meet.
I'm with her
I'm with AVixenLiterally on this one---this story fully deserves a higher score. You're churning out some great stories, Shaima, so more power to your pen (computer).
agreed
Simple , 5 stars
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