Wonderful! Sweet! The sense of innnocence in Louise is so amazing. Even as she gets more adventurous in her sexual awakening, it's her innocence that we hang onto.
Great!
esl
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Anonymous07/06/04
Excellent story line- keep up the good work
Maybe try something daring, such as bringing some of the members of the band into this courtship. Since she has awakened sexually, it might be time for others to get involved with Louise.
English
Superb!
Wonderful! Sweet! The sense of innnocence in Louise is so amazing. Even as she gets more adventurous in her sexual awakening, it's her innocence that we hang onto.
Great!
esl
Excellent story line- keep up the good work
Maybe try something daring, such as bringing some of the members of the band into this courtship. Since she has awakened sexually, it might be time for others to get involved with Louise.
Thinking they miss the point.
Louise is the best character ever to grace this site. She doesn't need to mess with anyone else.
esl
Fantastic
Don't change a thing. THe story is warm, loving and incredibly erotic.
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