The Seduction of Louise Ch. 15

I hope you can do another set as wonderful

what a great job with this series. it was romantic, erotic, and interesting plot twists to boot. I'll be watching for your stoies in the future. there is something about older women / younger men stories that just works. i hope you stick with that theme...

outstanding

Very good writing, and the story line was great too. I'm glad both of the characters were able to salvage their lives and had meaningful relationships. i take back all my previous comments about ending the story much earlier. I shall watch for any other submissions by you with great anticipation. You have the ability to define characters in such a way that it is so believable. You turned Ross into a mean assed vindictive womanizer from my perceived notion of him of the cheated on, and cuckolded husband. Thanks again for writing the story, and keeping an old man entertained

Gary

Superb!

Thanks for giving us these characters and so much of yourself I suspect. Louise was a delight to the very end. I can still see her rich big body through your eyes.

Wonderful!

esl

Well Done....

Amazin saga...i've enjoyed the story from the start to the very last word and credit must be given to you for having well thought out characters, all i can say that it's just a very well written story.....

great work...keep writing..

Excellent!

Very well written! I enjoyed that Louise evolved into a very sexy, very confident, mature, full-figured woman. I like how her confidence increased as their relationship progressed. I'm especially glad she got married to a great man at the end. I would have hated to see her remain single after her husband's death and her lover's relocation. She deserved happiness after her lover left. I also loved the older woman / younger man angle. You're a great writer. I hope that another series is in the future!

Thank you..

I enjoyed this series so much......In my opinion I think it is one of my favourite series on this site. Don't stop writing please.....you have far too much talent for that.

Wonderful Tits and Tail

This author has written a wonderful tale about the wonderful tits and tail of a woman named Louise. She is what every man would love to fuck. Well done!

See!

Many people loved Louise and her particular plight. She is the best drawn character I've met on this site. And guess what folks, Jaymie and I don't know each other from jack-shit. I admire his work with character development and dialog. A couple of things neglected on this site from time to time. A brilliant character was lovingly created here and that should be recognized.

esl

Bravo!!!

This has been a wonderful series to follow. Outstanding work. With the talent that you have, you must continue writing. All of us will be waiting for your next work.

wow

your story was excellent, please keep up the good work, keep writing!

Great story but a sad end for Louise

A truely believable story with a sad ending for Louise.

'Twas a good read!

For a change, this was a very well-written story. You might
have gone a bit overboard with repetious sex,but it really
didn't detract overly from a good story. You dealt with a
situation that had the possibility of a story going nowhere
and maybe you did get tired and wound it up rather abruptly,
but another chapter would have done nothing to enhance the
story. Keep writing!

Thank You

I have rarely read an erotic story that kept me as engrossed and as aroused as yours. I really loved it.

thanks

excellent

loed the story not often do I set and finish a long story in on one sitting. i had to keep reading to see how it turned out keep up the great work.

awesome story.

Great work

Loved it

A poignant story told with commendable compassion and taste

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