All Comments on 'Unbridled Lust Ch. 01'

by shadow_dreamer

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
So.....

So just what's her ethnic background, anyway? For some reason, I'm guessing she's asian, but that's just a hunch.

Erotica_WritingsErotica_Writingsalmost 20 years ago
hot baby

*Loved it* and keep up the good work sweety, I look forward to reading more of your stories. (((((Shadow_Dreamer)))))

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hot beach action!

Want to know what beach she hangs out at...would gladly rub suntan oil all over her hot body!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
GREAT STORY!

Absolutely awesome story; an excellent entry into the world of erotic writing - WELCOME! I actually know a gorgeous asian girl with wavy auburn hair and I couldn't help but put her in the story in my mind... very erotic. I hope we get more stories from you - thank you and KEEP WRITING! :-)

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