All Comments on 'Slave Girl Ch. 02'

I love your stories so fat and have earmarked your page and eagerly await your next installment. I will enjoy with a nice cup of wine.

As I keep reading I don't want the story to end. Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully there r many more to come.

i love this series , and especially how you are not rushing the transformation of angela , hope this goes on for a long time , cant wait for more , sex scenes are also great

I thoroughly enjoy this series and hope that you can continue it for many more chapters. I hope there is at least part of a chapter that shows Danielle's reaction to Kitten's story (I know in Chapter 1 we saw some of that, but now that Danielle knows the whole story, well....) and where Kitten is able to tell her life story to Alexandra and Brenda so that they can all become even closer. Hell I don't even care if there is no sex in that chapter. Just family bonding. I think it would be awesome and freeing for Kitten.

Of course you know there were some typos and other relatively minor grammar issues that again did not detract from the story.

Thank you again for a really great story line!

Ed

I might have misjudged this story due to the name, I thought it was really good the only part I do not like is the title "slave girl" and the use of the term "mistress" except for those two things, this is a good story

Thank you for using spellcheck. You're a peach as this is easier to read. However, you need to slow your roll. You're missing letters so that her becomes he and your becomes our, which significantly changes context.

So well done and well written too! I love where you're taking this! Thank you!

I think it would be great if Angela got the words tattooed on her body "property of my mistress" and "mistress's kitten". It would be great if the request came from Angela. Thanks for the story can't wait till the next chapter.

I love where this is going!

love this story .... definitely needs another chapter or 2

Came for the porn, stayed for the story. And what a wonderful one it is, I hope that you continue with it as I very much enjoy it.

I visit this site every day to see if there is a new chapter.

Great story!

These girls know how to make out. We always want a girl.

I'm looking every day hoping to see Chapter 3 has been posted...

:-)

Please write more of this series...forever...LOVE IT

Please continue it!

Please you must continue this story. It is great reading. Well done. Five Stars

Will you ever finish this?

I enjoyed this tremendously. One of the best! Hope the story and your imagination have the potential and inspiration for a sequel.

I love this story series. Cant wait for next chapter

All the way through reading this, I kept picturing a scene in my head.

Danielle leading kitten into the living room (naked and on a leash/fun and games perhaps?), where Alexandra and Brenda are sat. Kitten turns to Danielle and asks, "Please Mistress, may I be allowed to address your mother directly?"

"Of course, kitten. Go ahead."

Angela steps in front of her mistress's mother, kneels at her feet, head slightly bowed. "Ma'am, I just wanted to thank you for purchasing me for my mistress. I love her so very much. Thank you Ma'am, with all my heart, thank you."

The tears were falling from her eyes as she fell forward into Alexandra's lap. Her arms found their way around the blonde woman's waist and she clung to her tightly. There wasn't a dry eye in the room. Alexandra stroked the young girl's back and soon Angela was completely encapsulated in an outpouring of love from the other three women.

This is just such an amazingly good story, so refreshing to have a slave treated with love and compassion and yet remaining so sexy because of the slave element.

Please, please, please GIVE US MOOOOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!

Zoe

Please let there be another chapter. I think we've waited long enough.

I have read these chapters a couple of times.. Would you please add another chapter. They are so well writen..

I hope there will be more chapters.

This love story gets better & better. I hope Danielle & Angela live happy ever after & Angela's family get there come-uppance, and Angela is exonerated. Danielle & Angela could still live happily ever after, as they love each other.

I agree with the other commentators, more please.

I hope you are planning to write some more to this story

Still waiting on chap. 3..

Absolutely sweet, hot and loving.

This is an amazing story I soooooo need to know what happens!!

Super. When is the next chapter?!?!

Absolutely love this....more chapters please. Perhaps Kitten's tormentors could be purchased, or abducted, and made to pay for their indiscretions. Nothing like a bit of karma and who better to deliver a woman

That was really great! Please keep writing!

At the next town meeting Angela's abuser should be used and humiliated by his owner in front of everyone for fun

I love all four ladies

I would give more, but that is all that is available.

I long for the continuation of the story.

Very well written, though, there were a few minor typo's where one word was obviously ment but another was typed, such as "he" instead of "the", and others like it.

Still, a wonderful read.

Hope it continues!

This story goes beyond just erotica, it gives us a story that we want to just continue reading for not only the sexiness, but for how well the story is written. I really like the show of love that is given to everyone, regardless of being free or a slave.

I truly hope the author reads this and knows how desperately I want this story to continue. I know its a false hope but we can hope. This is my first time writing a review ever on anything, so I hope that just shows how much I love the story and the characters you have created. Thank you for sharing this story with us and I will definitely be reading more of your stories from now on.

please continue the story, please don't leave us hanging, this is such a beautiful story and well written !!!

This is by far the best story I have ever read on here!! It actually brought tears to my eyes a couple times and I'm a 55 yr old man!! It is both Erotic and Heartbreaking at the same time!! Please continue don't leave us hanging!! Thank you for.writing and sharing this!! Kevin_waugh41@yahoo.com

This series is absolutely amazing. Please continue

Looking forward to another chapter.

Love love love this story! Please continue this series. It is well written; characters that you because invested in, an interesting back story with just enough information to help us understand the characters and their actions, and of course an interesting sexual dynamic.

You've left us, the readers, still at the climax of the story and haven't given us any resolution. That is the only missing piece.

You've created an alternate reality that is both real enough for us to believe in, and at the same time made it a fantasy that both D/s find appealing. This isn't an easily accomplished, yet you've woven the pieces together very well.

This whole alternate reality has the potential to expand into several stories. So please finish this story.

Wonderful story. Really hope for more!!!!

Very nice story. Has potential bot in writing technicalities as well as plot! Please consider exploiting further the them of all four women enjoying themselves. The setting is exquisite!!

Way to ruin an emotional release at the end. Three paragraphs could have made it tolerable, maybe. Lot of writers on here like to 'ruin your orgasm'(emotionally for instance) with no follow through. So disrespectful. And I was absolutely loving this story. 2 stars.

That's it huh? One of the main themes of the story: wonderful Kitten has been tormented her whole life and is now truly loved and when she is finally ready to spill her guts we get about one sentence, and no comforting at all from mistress to finish out the chapter. It's been four years. Hey, don't submit it then. Ironic for an erotic fiction writer to.... I thought I was reading about 'lesbian sex' and I'm the one getting 'denied.' LAME

Wow!!!! What a powerful story!!!! Please don't let this story die like so many others here!!! Lots of potential still left!!!!!!

Such a great story. I can tell you put time into developing these characters and their world. Please don't leave this story here, you have so much more to say.

This is a great story would love to know what happens when Angela wears the uniforms for her mistress

This is a great series so far. An update would be very appreciated. Ignore the trolls and keep on writing. Cheers

That was a grest story! Please continue this

I love this series. Please continue this. There's a lot of potential to create something amazing with this

Definitely worth reserecting and continuing, nobody should ever be enslaved but the writing is so good and the love between mistresses and slave girls so sincere that this story needs bringing back

Normally I wouls never enjoy a slavery story but the love and compassion as well as their lust made this story a favorite. I would like to see more

Beautiful story despite the harsh background. PLEASE follow this one up with further chapters!!!!

Amazing story, I really wish to be Angela.

This has been such an amazing story to read, this is the first time I've actually commented on one before and just wanted to say thank you.

It would be amazing to read even more chapters :)

This story cries out for a third chapter!

Oh this has been wonderful! I desperately hope for a third part! My only critiques are a few spelling or grammatical errors here and there. Wonderful writing, besides!

Well written. I agree with the others, this story begs for more chapters.

5/5

J

One of the best stories I’ve read, just can’t believe that your going to leave us hanging on this ending. Please finish the story..

Great story, I just kind of wonder if this wasn’t the authors abusive history story of her family too??..

Please, please continue/finish this story.

More please. KIitten needs her story told.

I need more of this story!!

Kitten needs justice.