Slave Girl Ch. 02

A Compelling Story

I love your stories so fat and have earmarked your page and eagerly await your next installment. I will enjoy with a nice cup of wine.

So good

As I keep reading I don't want the story to end. Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully there r many more to come.

very brilliant

i love this series , and especially how you are not rushing the transformation of angela , hope this goes on for a long time , cant wait for more , sex scenes are also great

As we have discussed before

I thoroughly enjoy this series and hope that you can continue it for many more chapters. I hope there is at least part of a chapter that shows Danielle's reaction to Kitten's story (I know in Chapter 1 we saw some of that, but now that Danielle knows the whole story, well....) and where Kitten is able to tell her life story to Alexandra and Brenda so that they can all become even closer. Hell I don't even care if there is no sex in that chapter. Just family bonding. I think it would be awesome and freeing for Kitten.

Of course you know there were some typos and other relatively minor grammar issues that again did not detract from the story.

Thank you again for a really great story line!

Ed

ok

I might have misjudged this story due to the name, I thought it was really good the only part I do not like is the title "slave girl" and the use of the term "mistress" except for those two things, this is a good story

Thank You

Thank you for using spellcheck. You're a peach as this is easier to read. However, you need to slow your roll. You're missing letters so that her becomes he and your becomes our, which significantly changes context.

An amazing story!

So well done and well written too! I love where you're taking this! Thank you!

good story

I think it would be great if Angela got the words tattooed on her body "property of my mistress" and "mistress's kitten". It would be great if the request came from Angela. Thanks for the story can't wait till the next chapter.

Omg yes

I love where this is going!

love this story .... definitely needs another chapter or 2

Ah yes

Came for the porn, stayed for the story. And what a wonderful one it is, I hope that you continue with it as I very much enjoy it.

Great story

I visit this site every day to see if there is a new chapter.
Great story!

Here kitty kitty

These girls know how to make out. We always want a girl.

I'm looking every day hoping to see Chapter 3 has been posted...

:-)

Please more, LOVE THIS

Please write more of this series...forever...LOVE IT