All Comments on 'The Savage King Pt. 02'

A bit quick, but good. Too bad there isn't more.drawing out the intimate Scenes would of been better. Her reluctance didn't last long and not even any oral. For either character. Still I give 4 stars. Decent story

Thank you for the next chapter so soon!!! That was so hot and I'm loving this story! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!

I like the story, I agree with a previous commenter that you could draw out the scenes a bit. Also it was a bit distracting that it switched from past to present tense a few times and switched from 3rd person to 1st person on and off. Making these changes, or at least reading over your next story will improve the flow.

please next chapter!!!

Pleasssssssssse put another chapter. I love this story😊

I like the story, howevet, it is very distracting when you keep changing from present tense to past tense and from 1st person view to 3rd person view. Please pick one and stick with it.

Good story

Please choose a tense and a voice (ie first person or third person). Pretty good otherwise.

She should've just ridden off when he was fighting marauders and he left her with the horse.

Great story but you jumped from present tense to past tense as often as you went back and forth between first and third person context.