it has potential though. the characters need to be fleshed out a little bit more and a bit more detail. it feels a tad rushed. BUT it is a decent start, I'd like to see where you take this. pay no attention to the idiot that said it's "cut and paste", your race angle is right on in this instance.
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more racist copy and paste
Another terrible story copied and pasted that only focuses on the race of the characters.
interesting
it has potential though. the characters need to be fleshed out a little bit more and a bit more detail. it feels a tad rushed. BUT it is a decent start, I'd like to see where you take this. pay no attention to the idiot that said it's "cut and paste", your race angle is right on in this instance.
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