All Comments on 'The Deal'

I wanted more of course. This is going somewhere really fun. Doubt he will ever move out.

Are you the original writer of this?

I've read this before are you the original writer?

Thanks for your comments - yes, I am the original writer. I posted the Deal back in 2010. In 2015, I pulled all my stories from Literotica. Subsequently, I have had many, many very nice fans request the return of the Deal as well as a finish to the series. If my health and work behave, I plan to repost a chapter of the Deal a week back here while writing the end chapters. Thanks and I sincerely hope you enjoy my work.

Litfan10

Glad you are back and can't wait to read the complete "The Deal". Hope your time and health allow for completion. Thanks.

Thanks for the rather short intro to "The Deal."

Nicely written and error free, nice pace, and of course you left us (the readers) wanting more.

Do you plan to re-submit any of your previous stories? Please pick one or two of what you consider your best and submit them so we have something to keep you on our minds waiting to chapter two of The Deal.

Hey boaman007 - thanks.

grayge37 - right now I'm only reposting The Deal series but that will go up on a weekly basis - up to Chapter 30 is complete - that being the twenty-eight chapters I posted here in the past and two chapters I've written since. I expect the series will run mid thirties to forty chapters in total. I do have the end in mind and am very happy with it - now it is just a matter of getting there.

Yes folks he's the real deal. The original author.

I loved this series, and would come back to it every so often.

Sad to see it taken away, but glad that it's back.

I might finally get to see what happens in the end. Although I hope it does go for a whole while longer.

Thank you for coming back and what that means for you to do that despite life getting in the way.

If she hugs him he will feel her naked boobs..could lose the deal

Eric - thank you very much for your kind words. I have every intention of getting us all to the end of the story. I have a destination in mind but there is certainly some road to travel before we get there. I never know where Diana, Matt and company take me - honestly, this was a one shot that just grew and grew.

Prop69: the Deal can be very problematic which made/makes it so much fun to write. As I went, the story took twists and turns that I thought might irk some of the readers but overall the response has always been great. I'm thrilled with my planned ending but am very curious how everyone else will feel about it when we get there.

Hi. Next chapter cumming? Am looking forward to..

Will this continue?

Will Matt start dating?

Thank you for not trying to stuff-in a fuck scene at the end. I prefer character & story development. Take your time, but I would ultimately like to see a happy ending with a happy ending.

Thank you for sharing your creative efforts with us!

Now THAT is a GOOD story! :)

I'm saying just a bit lackluster.. I'll read the next installment though.

STOP Please .........its not good. its spoiling the good minds.

I really enjoyed the story and hope you choose to continue. You write well and the plot you've laid out is interesting but also fun. Nicely done!

It is a good start and I do seem to remember it, but just like tv , when I read I binge read. and by this time next week I will probably be off on some other kink. Too bad that you can't combine some of the one page chapters into longer ones'...

eagerly awaiting g the next installment

Yes, this star is 5 stars and very well written along with a great story plot. Hopefully, his Mom will keep having butterflies and get very horny too. Her son will really want to touch her and maybe by accident ( on both their parts ) it happens but no foul or ending the agreement ! She has strong need and he will most surely develop them if he is a healthy young guy; so they will both want to go further. This story has so much potential and you never know what could happen. Thanks !

From my last reply:

Anon: I originally posted twenty-six chapters here and will resubmit them one per week until they are all back up and then will continue as I am writing more now. I submit on Wednesdays which should hit Saturday for you to read.

fr_chaste_2_chased:Thanks for your great comments. The story has a long, long way to go. I hope you do like how the characters develop and how the story will ultimately end.

mcmurrayae: Thank you, very, very much.

anonymous: yeah, it does start slow (but I am very happy with how it starts.) I hope you hang around

Anonymous: I thought about having her tan nude, but I like the visual of the skin contrast. Honestly, reposting this gave me a chance to fix a stupid mistake from the first time when a reader caught that originally I had her go to a saloon. Oops.

Anonymous: Thanks, this comment really, really cracked me up. but....but...but...I always thought my job WAS to spoil the good minds?

nic331: Thank you very much for your wonderful comments. I have a long way to go with this story. This was intended to be a lot of fun and somewhere along the way it really went wild but I still love it.

Anonymous: Thanks for the comment and I know what you mean - one of the great things about Literotica is the wealth of stories - it really is hard to keep up with everything. I did think about merging chapters but I have this all printed out in a binder and I like the flow of the chapters as they exist now. The chapters do get longer with a lot of action.

peebuddy: Thank you very much. I will submit the next chapter every Wednesday which should get it up on the site around Saturday like this one did.

Anonymous: Thank you very, very much. Loved your comments. I was thrilled with this when I first started developing it because of the potential and the neat characters. I personally love the way it took off, but looking back from the beginning to where it ends it has been a very long and curvy ride, I hope you enjoy it.

I am enjoying the build up in this story and look forward to some real hot action in this house. Who knows where this could go.

Good writing - a bit simple but it flows really well. But the story so far, and the build up. Oooohhhhh man this is gonna be good I can tell. Didn't get a chance to read the story when it was on earlier, so I'm VERY excited to see what happens next.

Mom kept her word of the deal. Slow is good, not like a porn flick jumping right into right into a F session.

Hey Turtle: That from the beginning was my favorite aspect of this story - it could go anywhere. I let the characters lead me and off we went. I love where they took me and look forward to resuming the ride.

Anon: Thanks for the nice comments. Glad you like my writing. I did start slow and simple. It builds pretty quickly and then took off like a shot. Keep me posted on what you feel about it.

Anon: Don't get me wrong - I love down and dirty sex scenes, but right from the beginning this was all about the characters. The first chapter really does exist just as a jumping off point. Initially this all come about when I thought about how far a mother would go to help her son. That was what started this whole thing. I wanted Matt to be lovable, so I didn't want to go down a darker path like drugs or such that needed fixing so I went in this direction. Slowly over time the characters have just grown and grown. Over time my fetishes have intruded a bit, but hey, I need some fun as well.

So I didn't see it the first time around. I hope your fans won't SPOIL any of the plot. So far I love it, with the multiple directions that it can take. Hopefully you won't go down the "slut" or "humiliation" roads.

I much prefer the loving stories between the family members. Sex is too awesome to not have happy people involved with happy things going on. 5*s for now. I will definately vote for all of the chapters, but I may not comment if I am just going to echo all of the others. Again I'm loving it.

Welcome - the stories here can be great. Thank you for your great comments. I try not to spoil it with these comments either. I can tell you that I'm not much for humiliation either so that doesn't play a part. As an ethical slut myself, it depends how you consider the word on how that plays out here. You'll let me know as we continue. I love my characters just as they are and would love to be in their world. Other than minor corrections or flow improvements, I'm not changing anything from the originally posted chapters. At its heart this has always been a love story - about love in many faceted forms.

Absolutely outstanding. Feed me more.

This is actually one of the best story I have read on here. keep the chapters comming.

Thank you both for the very kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

I have many more chapters written and numerous after that planned.

Once a week I will post a chapter. Look for it to hit the lists on Friday.

Why was this deleted the first time around? I was on chapter 21 I think but went back to find them and poof, it was all gone. I hope you are in good health and can go on to finish this story as well as live happily

Thank you for your wishes for my health - I'm feeling pretty good and very happy to be writing again. So far on track.

I pulled all my work from here two years ago for personal reasons and while the reasons are still present, I have felt bad for all who have contacted me wanting to read the series. Immediate family incest is not something that is easy to find a home for anywhere, so in the end I have brought it back for all those who have been in touch with me requesting it.

I'll point out that you can find at least the first 20 chapters of this series on the Internet Archive website.

I've heard it is still available through the Internet Archive. I wonder why it is only up to Chapter 20 - I thought IA had everything ever put out on the web - truly a wonderful and scary concept.

I really don't mind my story being out there anywhere as long as (1.) I'm credited as the author (I'm damn proud of this series) and (2.) somebody isn't making money on it.

LT10,

Thanks for coming back and I am looking forward to additional chapters and a finally.

Cheers!

Thanks! Great to be back. Honestly, the only the reason why I'm back posting this here is you and all my readers. Enjoy

this is one of two series i really enjoyed on Literotica and was always looking forward to the next chapter. i was shocked when all your stories disappeared but glad to see you are back and good to hear you are in good health. i look forward to seeing the rest of this series.

Thanks for the very kind words. I'm curious - what was the other series you loved? I'm looking forward myself to further adventures of Diana and crew - from the beginning, I always have something in mind for each chapter but the gang loves taking frisky detours along the way.

Thanks again.

i kinda figured you would be curious....the other series is succubus summoning (a very entertaining series). cant wait till i can see the rest of The Deal back in your list, it just doesnt seem right to read it elsewhere.

Thanks, I'll have to check out that series. It does feel like home here for this. Keep me posted as the chapters grow. I just finished chapter twenty-eight, and went over chapter three to submit tomorrow. So far so good.

i look forward to seeing the new chapter and catching up on the other chapters. hope you enjoy that other series if you start reading it.

manyeyedhydra is a great writer. In the past I've only dabbled a bit with his work mostly knowing him from the Author's Hangout. I read the first two chapters of summoning and it is a delight. I probably will pick it up in ebook form. Thanks for the tip.

glad you like it, its an amusing series

I did pick up the first book - thanks again.

The 24 chapters of this series had already been published in 2013! Why bring them back online?

This is one of my favorite series on here. Lots of fun, especially after it starts to heat up! Can't wait to read the new chapters!

locky son of a bitch

This plot setup has been used many times in MS stories, and it's always a fun time for both the participants AND the readers!

Since MS stories are one of my favorite kinks, I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more of Matt and Diana's adventures.

Definitely a 5* start for a new author! Thanks for writing and sharing here.

I THINK IT'S A GREAT IDEA. I'D HAVE NEVER DONE ANYTHING LIKE THIS WITH MY MOM. 8 KIDS ALWAYS AROUND. MOM WAS SICKLY MOST TIMES ANYWAY! RAISING 8 KIDS KILLED HER BUT SHE DIED HAPPY! MISS YOU MOM!!!

I like the premise you used. I also love the setup! The potential is there for all to see, with a great use of foreshadowing. I think I'm going to like this series!

This could be fun

I like looking to part 2

Now THAT'S a loving, caring mom. Seriously, a Beautiful, creative beginning! I don't know what the other submissions hold but this is great out of the gate. 5 stars. -bern1965(pending)

well written, 5 stars. anxious to see where it goes from here!

I like the length that the mother will go to help her son improve his opportunities in later life. Although this is fiction, everyone knows people like Mathew in all stages of life. I enjoy erotic stories in which the characters personally and emotionally grow. Finally, I appreciate authors who know how to use the English language and does not have to resort using gutter language in every other sentence. So far, this author knows how to use adjectives and adverbs. 5 star rating assigned.

I really enjoyed the story. Sorta unique spin. I hope it continues!