All Comments on 'Modern Family Futa Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WOW!

NICE JOB. REALLY ENJOYED IT.

READY FOR NEXT CHAPTER.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WTF?

How did you write so much worse than a lot of your other stories? You seemed to forget stuff like dialog and character development.

KMB2476KMB2476about 7 years ago

Great story. Hope there's a sequel coming for Hayley

GrobnarGrobnarabout 7 years ago
Nicely Done

Very well done. A little lacking in development, but I think it's a solid story.

Stories_From_the_TVStories_From_the_TVabout 7 years agoAuthor
Development

For those commenting on lack of development, is there a specific story of mine you felt did that well? And if so what differed from this one? Because I feel I put in roughly the same if not more buildup in this then most of my other stories and would love to know what I could improve on?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
ignore the haters

This was really well done, despite the little dialog it was very emotive. It never felt lacking because of it. I think with the personality clashes of these two, it would read a lot less loving had more been included . description was spot on and allows readers to easily visualize. 10/10. Looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
next chapter

maybe do 1 with Claire and Gloria, with Gloria not have gone through the change

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Fan

Love all your stories, but you read my mind with this one. I'm the guy that gave you the idea for the Pam/Jan story. I think we both know that "The Office" with shemales is gold. Pam with a dick is too perfect. Please make it happen. Thanks.

CatBellAmCatBellAmabout 7 years ago
Very Good

Good story which is hopefully continued.

How about a story about Stargate SG-1 with Futa (Col. Samanta Carter) or JAG with Futa (Lt. Sarah MacKenzie)

Two series I've already looked at.

mightymouseG5mightymouseG5almost 7 years ago
Hot

i agree with about Claire and Gloria or Claire and Alex, Claire still the only 1 of them have changed

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