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Are you playing online, then stop, then restart your computer and get distracted again? Are you writing a story for literotica and if you don't, you get spanked? And what is a "pool rating" and why is it rising?

It may help to put this aside and read it again later, then maybe you can more easily see where it could be confusing to a reader. I've done this myself, especially after someone has asked what I'm talking about. :)