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Dare to Dream

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by Anonymous

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by doormouse06/18/04

;-)

This one was written just for fun.

I was just playing with a story idea and turned it into a poem instead. :)

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by tarablackwood2206/19/04

Doormouse....

...maybe you were playing, but there are enough ideas and thoughts here to rework into something that might be much more than just playful!

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by angel4u2lust406/19/04

loved it

very good

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by My Erotic Tail06/20/04

Possesive~

oh doormouse, woman thru and thru, look but don't touch huh?...hehehe...great poetry, (~_*)

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by Teenage Venus07/07/04

I like your style

Having read all your poems, I found it time well spent. I learned from them all.

This one, obviously written in a fit of humor, really made me laugh. However, it was well thought out and executed.
Candida.
PS: Promise I'll steer clear of him, lol.

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by sack01/03/05

unusual twists and turns.....

makes this a poem worth reading again and again!

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