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Made me laugh a little
I would have ended the story without the June 30 addition. I thought that made it less enjoyable and less funny. Would have given you 4 stars to that point, but that added material cost you a star - downgraded to a 3! What does it feel like to be downgraded? Maybe only the duck knows!
KISS
What I liked about your story was your need for release of anger and agitation. I don't blame you - to you, an large investment was performed that was not panning out satirical irony that you hold some investment of truth. You are your own comedian, but I laugh and miss the diss of the kiss.
You inspire me.
Not worth reading.
Not worth reading. Bad story by a terrible writer.
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