All Comments on 'Suburbs Just Got Interesting Ch. 03'

by njbaddad

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice read

You write well. Thank you for the stories. Looking to read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Looking forward

Nice storyline. Can't wait to see what happens next!

lolax2lolax2about 7 years ago
MORE¡¡¡

I loved it¡

Can´t wait for the Ch. 4

i love the way you describe sex and how dirty is Brandon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I need more¡¡¡

i love the way you write¡ it´s really hard to find good stories in literotica

i´m glad i found your stories :)

hope you don´t stop¡ <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I loved it¡

so hot¡ :D

so well writted¡ <3

so sexy ;)

so damn short :c

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Clear voice

You already have a writing style and a clear voice. Well written.

Sounds like mom is next.

I thought it a bit of a stretch for a married suburban father to be so reckless. Nowadays, the whole high school would know before morning. Nearly no thoughts expressed about his own wife and children or his neighbors sensibilities, either. Put me in mind of the Long Island Lolita story.

Looking forward to reading Ch.4.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Smutty, Sexy, Inappropriate.

I really needed to read a story like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Part 5?

This needs to be a full saga!

Such an intimate story with great writing needs to be continued

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