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Naked Linguine

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by fawnie06/18/04

i'm hungry!

this was so steamy!
would i be pushing it with the puns if i said saucy?
oh wait thats right..naked linguine!
i liked this!xo, fawnie

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by Anonymous06/18/04

Wonderful poetry!

this is brilliant and sexy!

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by normal jean06/18/04

I loved the whole thing

except the last line and it just didnt sem to fit with the rest of the poem, in texture and word choice I mean.
I really did enjoy it, especially the pace and spacing of the lines, it has a really strong rhythm :)

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