when she pointed out that I misspelled "intransigent". I had even looked it up before I used it because I was uncertain, and then I stupidly spelled it incorrectly in my comment anyway. I blame it on the steady diet of used condoms and cream pies. My latex allergy is really acting up and my keyboard is all gummed up from dining while commenting. What a mess!
It is well known among we scientific types that awful punctuation and the inability to make a coherent sentence is a certain sign of erectile dysfunction. "You are in really,really," "Kimmi" (I possess only one m), and my very odd ability to be both female and a cucky fag, make it all but certain. See, one only has to read the relevant surveys, (Not those fictitious ones cited by swingerjoe).
Your failure at boot licking need not be fatal to your progress in SA. One step, in a nine-step system is not a failure. You might be quire adept as step 7 (groveling), or step eight (genuflection). Keep trying!
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Anonymous01/17/17
Not a bad rendition of the resurrected old lover plot. Obviously it wasn't much of a marriage to begin with.
I appreciated you getting past the stupid duplicitous bitch part, and letting us know what happened to him after he got himself free. The daughter's role in facilitating the breakup and the continuing alienation was well crafted as well. You really helped us generate a lot of hate and loathing for this feminism bullshit of its my body and I can fuck who I want. Which is partially true, of course. At least these feminist pigs can fuck whoever will let them. Which in this case no longer included the husband she betrayed. Glad the ex-husband found a decent woman to share his life with, and eventually included a deserving granddaughter and former son-in-law.
A good story. Thank You.
And thank you for have the interest and the gumption to allow anonymous comments. Maybe even the unwashed have something worth hearing?
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Anonymous01/17/17
@BobNbobbi:
Why do you see the foundation of the problem as Henry's refusal to accept change? Clearly, the foundation of their problem was Fran's insistence on making that change in the first place.
@BigGuy33: Nice job! Thanks for sharing it with us and apologies for the off-topic post.
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Anonymous01/17/17
No No
He should have thrown Aaron out with his clothing... She has to decide... stay with husband or go with Aaron.....He is a wimp......
On the one hand, they complain about the cheating wife and her supporting characters being "unbelievable."
Then they complain that the cheated on husband didn't go nuclear, beat the cheaters up, shoot them dead, etc., when the only believable consequence of doing so would be that he ends up in prison or having to live the rest of his life on the run.
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Anonymous01/17/17
Not the usual anony comment
Well done. The characters were both believable and sympathetic. The only note that did not get sufficient development was Fran's letting Karen overrule her interest in tracking down the main character.
Great tale. One thing I don't understand is how Henry didn't beat the shit out of Aaron for being in his house with his wife. Maybe that just the South Philly coming out in me. How Fran thought she could convince her husband to stay is beyond me The daughter, however, was the biggest cunt in the tale. I'm very happy she died of aids. I hope she suffered. I'm also glad the stupid wife lived alone and lonely. Fuck her, too. The best part is the happy ending for all the betrayed spouses. The granddaughter also.
Five stars. I really, really liked this. The whole premise is well covered on LE, but you gave it a bit of a twist by interjecting the interloper while hubby was overseas. I could quibble over a few unrealistic points, but overall very engaging. I was interrupted half way through and couldn't wait to get back to it to finish.
Five stars for sure. It was really sad tale to read.
I know one story where wife "forced" her husband to stay with her because she would take their three children away from him. He stayed until the last one was 16 years old. He tells he is free now and ready to start his second life.
Grettings from Germany
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Anonymous01/18/17
Wonderful
So many stories on this site that delve into "sharing" present a very shallow understanding of the feelings involved. I really enjoyed the husband's journey, the subtlety of his decisions, and the finality of his resolve. The wife lied to him for over a year. That any person could think there's a future after that kind of dishonesty was maybe the weakest part of the story. But lust will bend the mind in mysterious ways.
I can't believe that a very good author like HDK would find this behavior so unbelievable. I might suggest that you check out some online forums like Relationships or relationship_advice on reddit ,SurvivingInfidelity.com,the coping with infidelity section on talkaboutmarriage.com or the infidelity section at loveshack.org.
I could suspend disbelief toward the wife, without ever excusing her betrayal. If they had never been apart, and then they were separated for 18 months, than it could be that her need for companionship would be stronger than her commitment to honesty, her integrity, and her respect for her marriage. So she cheated.
Slippery thing, dishonesty. Like a drug, once started, I think it's easier to do the second time. And the third. Etc. Then, to preserve your self image, you start to find excuses for your behavior, And the excuses get weirder and weirder.
Until the one person who knew the "old" you correctly calls "BULLSHIT!" on your antics, your betrayal, and your excuses. Because they weren't there to see your gradual descent into self-delusion, compared to the "old" you, the new and despicable you seems a total alien. Not only are your behaviors utterly repugnant to them, those same behaviors would have been repugnant to the "old" you (the one they knew) before your prolonged self-deception and rationalization.
As the band Triumph put it "Look in the mirror, tell me what do you see. Or can you lie to yourself, like your lying to me ?" Yes, given time, many of us can rationalize a ton of evil shit that we do. Not so much about "stupid" as being gullible to your own excuses.
It it no way excuses what her cheating. But it's why I have no problem believing the cheating wife's excuses sounded reasonable to her own ears after that long.
I once knew a woman (just a friend), who traveled down this sort of path. I hadn't seen her in a over year, but her behavior, contrasted "before" and "after," was night and day. And her excuses for her misbehavior were surreal. After trying to convince her that being "the other woman" to a married man was dishonest as hell, I finally walked away. Life's too short to deal with self-deluded people with the morals of an alley-cat.
A tidy story, containing some bizarrely deluded women (men in LW stories are, of course, paragons of virtue). Nice to see the cheating gene skipped the granddaughter's generation. I hate stories where a middle aged woman who has it all manages to wreck their marriage, and ends up a sad shell. I pity them, rather than revile them.
A well written story about two selfish women. Any lifestyle agreed to is fine by me, after all it's none of my business but to try and impose upon a partner shows there is no love or respect. I suppose there are psychological reasons for thinking that way but for me, well they were simply "away with the fairies".
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Anonymous01/18/17
BORING
Such a waste of space on this site, it could have been good, but like a retard you fuck up, just like a money fucking up football. Put some ACTUAL REVENGE in it and make the main character actually angry with the situation. The whole story was like a fucked up version of someone singing kumbaya. I think you were probably smoking pot while you wrote this pathetic garbage.
"No, she...died...6 months ago." – She’s living with her father, but doesn’t visit her grandfather because her cheating mother says not too? And it takes six months after her death for her to go see him?
“Apparently she blames herself for some reason." – Of course she blames herself! Her daughter obviously took after her, lost her husband, daughter and her life!
“Dad finally gave me everything after mom passed.” – Why would he respect her wishes?
Her mother’s lover ISN’T moving out, and Karen is mad at her father for leaving?
“You made the choice to leave.” – They both agreed on him taking the assignment. If she said no, he wouldn’t have gone. As he said, he was willing to try to work out her taking a lover while he was gone, but to intend keeping the lover now that he’s back is ridiculous! You made the choice to leave.
"Be quiet, Brian! This is my family and I will make the decisions when it comes to them." – Brian is a pussy! If it was me, I’d tell Karen that it’s MY family, too, and if I want my f-i-l to see his grandchild he will; and frankly I’m concerned about YOUR faithfulness if you approve of what your mother is doing!
If Fran wanted to find him, what the fuck does she care what Karen thinks? She didn’t care enough about what her HUSBAND thought to throw her lover out, but she listens to her daughter?
I’ve said many times before that I can’t stand that “women can accept more sex than men” crap. If that was true, then when the woman’s libido drops and she doesn’t want/need as much sex as her husband can provide then he should be able to take lovers!
I agree with you. As I think I said in part of my comment, I can't understand why Brian didn't get up on his hind legs and tell Karen that he was the baby's father, and that Henry WOULD have a relationship with their child!
And where was Brian when Kim was told the lies about Henry's departure?
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Anonymous01/18/17
Good tale and unfortunately it happens. The extended work or military trip or trip for work often are just excuses for a cheater. It's all in the vows Love, Honor, In sickness, In health, In good times and bad till death due us part. My take is don't get married if you can't be true to your vows and self respect. The hubby did it all perfect and I'm not sure how he didn't attack this guy. Aside from all that they did to him he should of tried to make believe to accept and pulled all money out and hidden. Then take a second mortgage or equity loan on the house. When all done with hidden cash and set up apt where he wanted to go and work he should of called that family dinner where he got everyone relaxed and comfortable so when the time was right he could of smashed that prick for destroying his life. I would of also wrote or taped a long letter to each family member including the unborn granddaughter and told in detail of the unspeakable actions. I wouldn't even consider reconciliation if she told me she did that while I was gone but would stop now . Many would go away that long and fuck anything they could and that is just as bad but he didn't. There is alway a guy to fuck a willing woman. There are crazy men who go away to prison and there wife's are finding guys to fuck. This guy was away for five years and someone he knew was fucking his wife for at least four of them and kinda bragged about what he did with her. How he took her anal virginity, breaking that ass in as he put it. He would really demean her on purpose like cum all over her face then slap it with his dick , make her blow him after he fucked her ass and would often make her rim his asshole. All of this knowing that if hubby found out he would be dead instantly. Most not all peoples morals are in the toilet and that's why the divorce and cheat rates are sky high. It's a real shame but stories that have the guy or girl stand up to the cheating is great, so much better for me than a willing wimp to allow total humiliateing disrespect
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Anonymous01/19/17
Powerful & Painful!
This is one of those stories that is both powerful and painful in the message it delivers!!! The painful part was the way his cheating whore of a wife and faithless slut of a daughter treated him.
Also the twisted logic of both women was painful and unfortunately NOT unique. There have actually been historical cultures, like the ancient Celtic cultures in England, Ireland and France that practiced Matriarchal societies with the women having multiple or rotating husbands. NOT a sustainable family relationship, nor a loving one for the men!!!
The powerful part is the husband's refusal to go along with his tripe -- willing to pay the emotional pain and isolation to maintain his principals and dignity -- and the granddaughter's supporting his position and establishing a loving relationship with him and his new wife!!!
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Anonymous01/19/17
Boring, tedious, and unbelievable
A tiring waste of my time to read this; I will not waste any more time reading any other stories from this author. That Brian lived like that shows that the author doesn't understand men or how to undo a bad situation. What a cuckold wimp.
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Anonymous01/19/17
WON'T STAND FOR IT..
So our hero comes back from overseas and finds his wife has moved some turd into his house and his response is to move out? BULLSHIT!!! That slut and pencildick would have been living in the motel six. No way I roll over for the cheating slut for any reason.
If he had kicked that slut and fuckface to the curb it might have saved his daughter from going down that road because she would have seen consequences for sluttish behavior. After all what had she seen? Dad just moving on letting the whore disrespect him and take advantage.
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Anonymous01/19/17
u ain't got it wanna be taler
2 star
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Anonymous01/19/17
@ lordslamdaw
If as you write, husband takes a TEN SECOND COUNT, then he has been knocked out and lost the fight.
However you did mention matt moreau so perhaps you are channeling his ending
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Anonymous01/19/17
@bobandboobie
Why threeheaded-if wife can love two men husband is entitled to add lover of his own
Would have been interesting if husband chose to return on day of last meeting with the fourth head. Given wife's arguments that would have been appropriate and she would have been forced to accept.
That turn of events would have been my choice. He had financial resources and could easily have procured and ''exstended stay'' escort.
Given that option, and a weekend of listening to her husband have the sex of his life with a much more attractivr, better built extremely vocal and accomplished second woman as husband's love interest, the wife would have caved and sent aaron packing.
Husband did say he was willing to forgive and forget if she sent lover packing. That would have saved daughter's life perhaps
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Anonymous01/20/17
Not as unusual as you may think
In a number of European countries it was normal for a women to have what was known as a 'special friend'.In England and US we consider this abhorrent which I do also.Seems to ignore the Christian bible and makes a mockery of marriage.My father had a number of mistresses during and before his marriage to the women I thought was my mother.
I found out when I was 16 that the women I knew as Julia and not my mother was in fact my mother.She was born in Montgomery Alabama and married an Englishman working in US and UK he travelled between both counties monthly.she had me and moved with him to England.When she got to UK she found he was engaged and lived with a women called Eve.They had registered my birth in U.K. And with Eve as my mother.Julia divorced him and had to go home by immigration rules and was stopped from taking me because of their lies and fraud.She tried to keep in contact with me but it was blocked by 'mom and dad' when I was 16 I was told and went to US embassy for help.They contacted mom and gave me a US passport and a ticket back to US.
Shows how bad these types of things can be and adultery always causes pain on the innocent
Well written and enjoyed it.
To all the writers who don't allow comments, or at LEAST feedback, don't expect me to read your stories. If you are writing for your own pleasure, fine, but if you post to a public forum you obviously want others to read them.
That being the case, don't you want to know how they feel about the stories? Don't you want to know where you might be able to improve?
Or do you think that you are so wonderful a writer that you don't need constructive criticism?
Yes, I know there are trolls out there. But you know the old saying, sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me. Block Anons, that's where most of the trolls lurk. Ignore the others who toss bombs, respond to those who seem to want to help you improve. I'd like to think that it has helped me, though I'm sure that there are still some that think I'm only getting worse, LOL, so be it.
I've been so frustrated reading a story and preparing comments, only to find comments disabled.
End of rant.
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Anonymous01/22/17
Good Story
I liked it. A bit different, told from an interesting angle.
No burn the bitch, no kick the other guys ass --- even though he deserved it . No army ranger, green beret, special force pals pay back. No use the mafia or CIA markers to make them all pay a very high price. Though those are good too when done well.
This was a rather a simple: "Yeah well, I am out of here. I see what you want from me and that is not going to happen. You people have a good life...or not."
Five stars.
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Anonymous01/26/17
Preposterous!
This wife and daughter seem clueless about fidelity, a value held more or less by everybody in our society and surely discussed by this couple before this trucker headed over seas. Fran's thinking and logic seems implausible to me.
I saw someone mention that mother and daughter were selfish. Wrong. They were insane. And yes, their asses would have hit the street the instant I knew about the arrangement. Where would they have gotten the money to hire an attorney? They were shit, and shit gets flushed.
Well-written but,sad. Refreshing to read a story where the men weren't willing cucks.
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Anonymous02/18/17
Struck A Nerve
While I was on a tour in the military, I became aware that my now ex-wife had had sexual relations with over 50 men. And when I returned I was shocked to find out that she wasn't willing to refrain from her new sexual lifestyle. She remarried within days of our divorce being finalized. She went on to have three children, but none from her second husband.
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Anonymous02/27/17
Unbelievable?
People get hit by crazy shit like this all the time. Count yourself lucky if you can dismiss characters like this as unrealiastic.
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Anonymous02/27/17
Grandma murdered her daughter with her bullshit and grandpa needs to tell the old cheater that. -2 for another matt moreau story with no punishment for the bull.
English
And no letter!
You walk away and do your best to live the rest of your life as if the nightmare had never happened.
I have to thank Kimi1990 for being so delicate
when she pointed out that I misspelled "intransigent". I had even looked it up before I used it because I was uncertain, and then I stupidly spelled it incorrectly in my comment anyway. I blame it on the steady diet of used condoms and cream pies. My latex allergy is really acting up and my keyboard is all gummed up from dining while commenting. What a mess!
@foolscap
It is well known among we scientific types that awful punctuation and the inability to make a coherent sentence is a certain sign of erectile dysfunction. "You are in really,really," "Kimmi" (I possess only one m), and my very odd ability to be both female and a cucky fag, make it all but certain. See, one only has to read the relevant surveys, (Not those fictitious ones cited by swingerjoe).
Your failure at boot licking need not be fatal to your progress in SA. One step, in a nine-step system is not a failure. You might be quire adept as step 7 (groveling), or step eight (genuflection). Keep trying!
Not a bad rendition of the resurrected old lover plot. Obviously it wasn't much of a marriage to begin with.
I appreciated you getting past the stupid duplicitous bitch part, and letting us know what happened to him after he got himself free. The daughter's role in facilitating the breakup and the continuing alienation was well crafted as well. You really helped us generate a lot of hate and loathing for this feminism bullshit of its my body and I can fuck who I want. Which is partially true, of course. At least these feminist pigs can fuck whoever will let them. Which in this case no longer included the husband she betrayed. Glad the ex-husband found a decent woman to share his life with, and eventually included a deserving granddaughter and former son-in-law.
A good story. Thank You.
And thank you for have the interest and the gumption to allow anonymous comments. Maybe even the unwashed have something worth hearing?
@BobNbobbi:
Why do you see the foundation of the problem as Henry's refusal to accept change? Clearly, the foundation of their problem was Fran's insistence on making that change in the first place.
@BigGuy33: Nice job! Thanks for sharing it with us and apologies for the off-topic post.
No No
He should have thrown Aaron out with his clothing... She has to decide... stay with husband or go with Aaron.....He is a wimp......
I really don't get some of the comments
On the one hand, they complain about the cheating wife and her supporting characters being "unbelievable."
Then they complain that the cheated on husband didn't go nuclear, beat the cheaters up, shoot them dead, etc., when the only believable consequence of doing so would be that he ends up in prison or having to live the rest of his life on the run.
Not the usual anony comment
Well done. The characters were both believable and sympathetic. The only note that did not get sufficient development was Fran's letting Karen overrule her interest in tracking down the main character.
Damn
Great tale. One thing I don't understand is how Henry didn't beat the shit out of Aaron for being in his house with his wife. Maybe that just the South Philly coming out in me. How Fran thought she could convince her husband to stay is beyond me The daughter, however, was the biggest cunt in the tale. I'm very happy she died of aids. I hope she suffered. I'm also glad the stupid wife lived alone and lonely. Fuck her, too. The best part is the happy ending for all the betrayed spouses. The granddaughter also.
Five Stars
Loved it!
Five stars. I really, really liked this. The whole premise is well covered on LE, but you gave it a bit of a twist by interjecting the interloper while hubby was overseas. I could quibble over a few unrealistic points, but overall very engaging. I was interrupted half way through and couldn't wait to get back to it to finish.
good one
Five stars for sure. It was really sad tale to read.
I know one story where wife "forced" her husband to stay with her because she would take their three children away from him. He stayed until the last one was 16 years old. He tells he is free now and ready to start his second life.
Grettings from Germany
Wonderful
So many stories on this site that delve into "sharing" present a very shallow understanding of the feelings involved. I really enjoyed the husband's journey, the subtlety of his decisions, and the finality of his resolve. The wife lied to him for over a year. That any person could think there's a future after that kind of dishonesty was maybe the weakest part of the story. But lust will bend the mind in mysterious ways.
Weird
She insane?
True to life?
I can't believe that a very good author like HDK would find this behavior so unbelievable. I might suggest that you check out some online forums like Relationships or relationship_advice on reddit ,SurvivingInfidelity.com,the coping with infidelity section on talkaboutmarriage.com or the infidelity section at loveshack.org.
A link to one of the saddest true stories I have read.
https://www.reddit.com/r/relationship_advice/comme nts/5eez5c/update_lessons_and_how_you_can_help_re_ the_case/
Decent work
I could suspend disbelief toward the wife, without ever excusing her betrayal. If they had never been apart, and then they were separated for 18 months, than it could be that her need for companionship would be stronger than her commitment to honesty, her integrity, and her respect for her marriage. So she cheated.
Slippery thing, dishonesty. Like a drug, once started, I think it's easier to do the second time. And the third. Etc. Then, to preserve your self image, you start to find excuses for your behavior, And the excuses get weirder and weirder.
Until the one person who knew the "old" you correctly calls "BULLSHIT!" on your antics, your betrayal, and your excuses. Because they weren't there to see your gradual descent into self-delusion, compared to the "old" you, the new and despicable you seems a total alien. Not only are your behaviors utterly repugnant to them, those same behaviors would have been repugnant to the "old" you (the one they knew) before your prolonged self-deception and rationalization.
As the band Triumph put it "Look in the mirror, tell me what do you see. Or can you lie to yourself, like your lying to me ?" Yes, given time, many of us can rationalize a ton of evil shit that we do. Not so much about "stupid" as being gullible to your own excuses.
It it no way excuses what her cheating. But it's why I have no problem believing the cheating wife's excuses sounded reasonable to her own ears after that long.
I once knew a woman (just a friend), who traveled down this sort of path. I hadn't seen her in a over year, but her behavior, contrasted "before" and "after," was night and day. And her excuses for her misbehavior were surreal. After trying to convince her that being "the other woman" to a married man was dishonest as hell, I finally walked away. Life's too short to deal with self-deluded people with the morals of an alley-cat.
Tidy
A tidy story, containing some bizarrely deluded women (men in LW stories are, of course, paragons of virtue). Nice to see the cheating gene skipped the granddaughter's generation. I hate stories where a middle aged woman who has it all manages to wreck their marriage, and ends up a sad shell. I pity them, rather than revile them.
Tragic
A well written story about two selfish women. Any lifestyle agreed to is fine by me, after all it's none of my business but to try and impose upon a partner shows there is no love or respect. I suppose there are psychological reasons for thinking that way but for me, well they were simply "away with the fairies".
BORING
Such a waste of space on this site, it could have been good, but like a retard you fuck up, just like a money fucking up football. Put some ACTUAL REVENGE in it and make the main character actually angry with the situation. The whole story was like a fucked up version of someone singing kumbaya. I think you were probably smoking pot while you wrote this pathetic garbage.
Thoughts
"No, she...died...6 months ago." – She’s living with her father, but doesn’t visit her grandfather because her cheating mother says not too? And it takes six months after her death for her to go see him?
“Apparently she blames herself for some reason." – Of course she blames herself! Her daughter obviously took after her, lost her husband, daughter and her life!
“Dad finally gave me everything after mom passed.” – Why would he respect her wishes?
Her mother’s lover ISN’T moving out, and Karen is mad at her father for leaving?
“You made the choice to leave.” – They both agreed on him taking the assignment. If she said no, he wouldn’t have gone. As he said, he was willing to try to work out her taking a lover while he was gone, but to intend keeping the lover now that he’s back is ridiculous! You made the choice to leave.
"Be quiet, Brian! This is my family and I will make the decisions when it comes to them." – Brian is a pussy! If it was me, I’d tell Karen that it’s MY family, too, and if I want my f-i-l to see his grandchild he will; and frankly I’m concerned about YOUR faithfulness if you approve of what your mother is doing!
If Fran wanted to find him, what the fuck does she care what Karen thinks? She didn’t care enough about what her HUSBAND thought to throw her lover out, but she listens to her daughter?
I’ve said many times before that I can’t stand that “women can accept more sex than men” crap. If that was true, then when the woman’s libido drops and she doesn’t want/need as much sex as her husband can provide then he should be able to take lovers!
@cabbage01132
Yeah, I was thinking something along those lines, maybe dumping the stroganoff on one or both of them, and then, yes, beating the crap out of Aaron!
@Anonymous Re: "I liked it"
I agree with you. As I think I said in part of my comment, I can't understand why Brian didn't get up on his hind legs and tell Karen that he was the baby's father, and that Henry WOULD have a relationship with their child!
And where was Brian when Kim was told the lies about Henry's departure?
Good tale and unfortunately it happens. The extended work or military trip or trip for work often are just excuses for a cheater. It's all in the vows Love, Honor, In sickness, In health, In good times and bad till death due us part. My take is don't get married if you can't be true to your vows and self respect. The hubby did it all perfect and I'm not sure how he didn't attack this guy. Aside from all that they did to him he should of tried to make believe to accept and pulled all money out and hidden. Then take a second mortgage or equity loan on the house. When all done with hidden cash and set up apt where he wanted to go and work he should of called that family dinner where he got everyone relaxed and comfortable so when the time was right he could of smashed that prick for destroying his life. I would of also wrote or taped a long letter to each family member including the unborn granddaughter and told in detail of the unspeakable actions. I wouldn't even consider reconciliation if she told me she did that while I was gone but would stop now . Many would go away that long and fuck anything they could and that is just as bad but he didn't. There is alway a guy to fuck a willing woman. There are crazy men who go away to prison and there wife's are finding guys to fuck. This guy was away for five years and someone he knew was fucking his wife for at least four of them and kinda bragged about what he did with her. How he took her anal virginity, breaking that ass in as he put it. He would really demean her on purpose like cum all over her face then slap it with his dick , make her blow him after he fucked her ass and would often make her rim his asshole. All of this knowing that if hubby found out he would be dead instantly. Most not all peoples morals are in the toilet and that's why the divorce and cheat rates are sky high. It's a real shame but stories that have the guy or girl stand up to the cheating is great, so much better for me than a willing wimp to allow total humiliateing disrespect
Powerful & Painful!
This is one of those stories that is both powerful and painful in the message it delivers!!! The painful part was the way his cheating whore of a wife and faithless slut of a daughter treated him.
Also the twisted logic of both women was painful and unfortunately NOT unique. There have actually been historical cultures, like the ancient Celtic cultures in England, Ireland and France that practiced Matriarchal societies with the women having multiple or rotating husbands. NOT a sustainable family relationship, nor a loving one for the men!!!
The powerful part is the husband's refusal to go along with his tripe -- willing to pay the emotional pain and isolation to maintain his principals and dignity -- and the granddaughter's supporting his position and establishing a loving relationship with him and his new wife!!!
Boring, tedious, and unbelievable
A tiring waste of my time to read this; I will not waste any more time reading any other stories from this author. That Brian lived like that shows that the author doesn't understand men or how to undo a bad situation. What a cuckold wimp.
WON'T STAND FOR IT..
So our hero comes back from overseas and finds his wife has moved some turd into his house and his response is to move out? BULLSHIT!!! That slut and pencildick would have been living in the motel six. No way I roll over for the cheating slut for any reason.
If he had kicked that slut and fuckface to the curb it might have saved his daughter from going down that road because she would have seen consequences for sluttish behavior. After all what had she seen? Dad just moving on letting the whore disrespect him and take advantage.
u ain't got it wanna be taler
2 star
@ lordslamdaw
If as you write, husband takes a TEN SECOND COUNT, then he has been knocked out and lost the fight.
However you did mention matt moreau so perhaps you are channeling his ending
@bobandboobie
Why threeheaded-if wife can love two men husband is entitled to add lover of his own
Would have been interesting if husband chose to return on day of last meeting with the fourth head. Given wife's arguments that would have been appropriate and she would have been forced to accept.
That turn of events would have been my choice. He had financial resources and could easily have procured and ''exstended stay'' escort.
Given that option, and a weekend of listening to her husband have the sex of his life with a much more attractivr, better built extremely vocal and accomplished second woman as husband's love interest, the wife would have caved and sent aaron packing.
Husband did say he was willing to forgive and forget if she sent lover packing. That would have saved daughter's life perhaps
Not as unusual as you may think
In a number of European countries it was normal for a women to have what was known as a 'special friend'.In England and US we consider this abhorrent which I do also.Seems to ignore the Christian bible and makes a mockery of marriage.My father had a number of mistresses during and before his marriage to the women I thought was my mother.
I found out when I was 16 that the women I knew as Julia and not my mother was in fact my mother.She was born in Montgomery Alabama and married an Englishman working in US and UK he travelled between both counties monthly.she had me and moved with him to England.When she got to UK she found he was engaged and lived with a women called Eve.They had registered my birth in U.K. And with Eve as my mother.Julia divorced him and had to go home by immigration rules and was stopped from taking me because of their lies and fraud.She tried to keep in contact with me but it was blocked by 'mom and dad' when I was 16 I was told and went to US embassy for help.They contacted mom and gave me a US passport and a ticket back to US.
Shows how bad these types of things can be and adultery always causes pain on the innocent
Well written and enjoyed it.
@ last comment ; some guy executed the exact payback you described. So macho.
He's in the jailhouse now. Oh well.
Open Letter
Please excuse me, BigGuy while I vent.
To all the writers who don't allow comments, or at LEAST feedback, don't expect me to read your stories. If you are writing for your own pleasure, fine, but if you post to a public forum you obviously want others to read them.
That being the case, don't you want to know how they feel about the stories? Don't you want to know where you might be able to improve?
Or do you think that you are so wonderful a writer that you don't need constructive criticism?
Yes, I know there are trolls out there. But you know the old saying, sticks and stones may break my bones, but words will never hurt me. Block Anons, that's where most of the trolls lurk. Ignore the others who toss bombs, respond to those who seem to want to help you improve. I'd like to think that it has helped me, though I'm sure that there are still some that think I'm only getting worse, LOL, so be it.
I've been so frustrated reading a story and preparing comments, only to find comments disabled.
End of rant.
Good Story
I liked it. A bit different, told from an interesting angle.
No burn the bitch, no kick the other guys ass --- even though he deserved it . No army ranger, green beret, special force pals pay back. No use the mafia or CIA markers to make them all pay a very high price. Though those are good too when done well.
This was a rather a simple: "Yeah well, I am out of here. I see what you want from me and that is not going to happen. You people have a good life...or not."
Five stars.
Preposterous!
This wife and daughter seem clueless about fidelity, a value held more or less by everybody in our society and surely discussed by this couple before this trucker headed over seas. Fran's thinking and logic seems implausible to me.
IMO
I saw someone mention that mother and daughter were selfish. Wrong. They were insane. And yes, their asses would have hit the street the instant I knew about the arrangement. Where would they have gotten the money to hire an attorney? They were shit, and shit gets flushed.
Sad!
Well-written but,sad. Refreshing to read a story where the men weren't willing cucks.
Struck A Nerve
While I was on a tour in the military, I became aware that my now ex-wife had had sexual relations with over 50 men. And when I returned I was shocked to find out that she wasn't willing to refrain from her new sexual lifestyle. She remarried within days of our divorce being finalized. She went on to have three children, but none from her second husband.
Unbelievable?
People get hit by crazy shit like this all the time. Count yourself lucky if you can dismiss characters like this as unrealiastic.
Grandma murdered her daughter with her bullshit and grandpa needs to tell the old cheater that. -2 for another matt moreau story with no punishment for the bull.
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