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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I think I read to fast, can you make the chapters longer please. Five stars again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Tim thought, then I thought?

3-4 paragraphs in you went from a third person narrative to a first person narrative. I could understand a narrative change between chapters but not mid-chapter.

Otherwise a decent read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Oh yeah...young mans wishful thinking, gone on steroids. LP

slowhand21slowhand2110 months ago

Didn’t use his right hand . . . yet. 😏

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