All Comments on 'Gym Adventure'

Very hot tease story. I like the beat, you can dance to it!

Incredibly well-written, incredibly sexy - without the usual pump and cum. So hot and well-told I felt like I was in the audience! Keep it up! Mine is!

I enjoyed your tantalizing tail...I meant tale. Very descriptive and erotic, GOOD LUCK (~_*)

Nice story...it makes working out really enjoyable.

I don't give negatives, and won't start now.

It was well written, yet it pained me to read of such a big headed, self centred control freak ( I know the wrong words, but kids are distracting my thoughts grrrr ).

I don't know about other girls, and I'm putting out there with this comment, but I absolutely hate reading about girls big noting themselves. 'Ooh he loves my gorgeous, perfect breasts', 'they drool over me... '... ugh

just one of my pet hates.

you don't have anything nice to say, then don't say anything at all.

My two bobs ;-)

i have a fantasy about fingering myself and cumming in public. after reading this, i might just have to!

Maybe I should take up a new hobby. Working out in the gym perhaps? Hot fun.

I for one think it's great if a woman enjoys her body. My pet peeve are women who take it as some point of pride to not like themselves and furthermore discourage other women from confidence. Screw them with a 5lb free weight! ;)

But I loved the story, it was very hot and I do so enjoy exhibitionism!

you did a wonderful job of describing the scene and your emotions. I felt like I was there. If you have any more stories, e-mail them to me. I would love to help you develop your creative talent.

I wish I could have been there! Everytime I go to the Gym I wish I could have moment like yours! Thanks.

Love the story once again. thanks for sharing! :)