Predator Ch. 02

Good to have you back

Thanks for another interesting and thought provoking submission.

Ho ho

This just gets better and better. I was considering abandoning Literotica because of the dearth of decent writing. Only the stupidity of 'commenters' comments kept me 'car crash' interested. This story is keeping me in there; well done and thank you.

Interesting story, but...

An interesting but complex story.
I explain, I read the first chapter and then the latter, and because English is not my native language, I have had some problem understanding the plot of the story.
I have come to understand, I think, that Carol is part of the predatory woman group, if so, why she allowed Amy to die (they were friends, right?). Why have not they neutralized it? Why does Duke continue his relationship with Carol? Knowing who she is, he has been compromised since last summer.
Something has escaped me, or has not yet been revealed.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

re: oldromatic

My guess, at this point, is that Carol has something on The Duke, but who am I to know???
Glad you're enjoying the story so far.

I'm hooked...

My money is on Delaney being a spook for them. Either way, keep them coming.

Old saying: Power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely. I think the only question is when the powerful fall and how far.

Excellent Plot

Beautifully executed. The eternal problem of ends justifying means. The moment collateral damage is authorized the system is compromised. Certainly the question,
"What else could I do?" comes into focus here. The author certainly is putting the medical profession on a pedestal here by making it appear that a person like Delaney would have trouble with the course.