My Last Client Ch. 01

pretty dumb

Not much of a story. Kind of dumb.. after that he owned me? Really dumb. I find incredible it was posted.

i hope this bitch gets put out on her ass

If...

If "everything about this man was perfect", if "he owned her from that night on", why not forget her husband, her marriage, her children, and become her personal whore or maybe ask him to marry her? Ahhh, that's the main point: Would any man forget his family to marry a wanton whore that fucked him just a few minutes after meeting him for the first time? Finally: How will her husband react to her cheating and arriving home dripping her lover's cum? I know this is part 1, but from here this just can go lower and lower to end finally in the sewer, swimming at ease with all the shit in there...1*

ALL YOU HATERS

Why not write your own L.W. stories instead of so many words just to complain.
We would enjoy reading stories from you since you all know how to write

good 1st story/1st chapter

Look forward to future chapters. Hopefully he will stuff her tight ass with his huge cock and she does ass-to-mouth.

PS ignore the haters.

Keep Writing

Good first story. Maybe more chapters about this client and/or more stories about other clients. 5 Stars

Why are so many of the comments

"Written the style weird, as if using they are a translator of the online?"

Hmm

Seven inches soft, eight inches hard. Very odd cock, that. Very bad story, too. Just another in the long line of hormonal walking vaginas. Talk about stereotypical!

What to say about this?

A bad story! Worst characters!

Let me guess, she "loves her husband soooo much" too right? Or "it's not her fault, hormones made her do it."

So why stay married to her husband?

She feels no guilt, no remorse and admitted that she would do anything for him after just meeting him....so why stay with her husband whom she doesn't even like, let alone love.

and then this site bans people who try and help the witewr, This site sucks

amen

@previous anon

bitter much, bonnie?

re: ALL YOU HATERS

You didn't any actual opinion about the story, just slammed others for daring to post their opinions.

It'd be an interesting pile of rationalization how THEY'RE the haters and not you.

Tough Crowd.

I loved this one.
"If "everything about this man was perfect", if "he owned her from that night on", why not forget her husband, her marriage, her children, and become her personal whore or maybe ask him to marry her? Ahhh, that's the main point: Would any man forget his family to marry a wanton whore that fucked him just a few minutes after meeting him for the first time? Finally: How will her husband react to her cheating and arriving home dripping her lover's cum? I know this is part 1, but from here this just can go lower and lower to end finally in the sewer, swimming at ease with all the shit in there...1*"

This is a Erotic Story site.

What are you doing here if you are not looking for Porn.

Stop reading porn and go to church.

Pretty Sad.

To @StillSexySadie...

What is porn for you? Just two human beings fucking like two dogs that meet for the first time in some street? Why didn't you write this exact story with two single persons? Wouldn't that be porn? To be good porn they must be married, with children, have no morals, no respect for their families? To be good porn they must fuck like that and then go home and kiss their children and show them and to their spouses that they have been fucking a strange that owns them now and make her go home dripping his cum? I wasn't the only reader to think that she didn't love her husband and children, and that she should get a divorce and live her life as a free woman...And she fucking around, being a free woman would be porn too...

Am other chuck story

Divorce time .

A Constructive Suggestion

You should ask some of your female friends how much they enjoy a painful fuck.

1*

cuck shit.

1* you have the wrong idea about what porn that is worth read is. This certainly ISN'T it. 1*

Too stupid...

A 55 year old man did that to this woman???? Good luck with this tale, what kind of control would she show with a 30 year old next time????? Just too stupid for words.....

2 For Effort (1st story)

When he first went down on her how is it that he was lapping up her cum when she had not had an orgasm yet? And second....what are "inner lips of my clitoris"? I have never seen lips on a clit! wonder if hers also have teeth....ouch!