All Comments on 'The Day After Ch. 02'

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Bill779Bill779over 7 years ago

Wow - love the story. Wouldn't mind living that dream

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A great story

Really enjoying it. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

Can u makii the day after CH. 03 when he and chase go canping

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved it

Loving the story except for Joey line. The other guys, Travis and chase seemed to respect him. Joey is a wannabe. It's not believable. Graham knows he had sex that night. Who is Joey gonna tell or show the pics. He should kick some sense into Joey that if he wants pussy, he has to treat nicely. Also, can you have chase bring sexy undies like thongs for him to wear during their camping. It's hot that chase uses words like pussy or cunt to describe the bottom's ass.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I agree. I am also not a fan of Joey. He's a little punk.

But I'm glad Chase was so "cool" about everything haha maybe Travis will be a surprise visitor on this camping trip

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hmmm!

Chase is cool. Joey is a prick. He needs to get his friends Chase and Travis and double dick Joey, and take pictures. World is bad enough without adding haters . Bring on a "dealing with Joey" after the fun camping trip. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Keep it going

The Chase story line is developing nicely! Friends with benefits are always delightful. Can't say I like the Joey story line but please don't stop writing, lets see what happens on a LONG weekend camping trip!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Dump the Joey's abuse bit, it is boring

Joey isn't worth a mention, he is someone who deserves all of life's bad things to happen to him before he abuses any more people.

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