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A Moment

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by LeBroz12/15/06

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Love lasts forever and with it
Doubts as well.

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by duddle14612/19/06

After all.

A woman is consumed with self doubt and a bit of loathing for her past mistakes ~ She comforts herself knowing she's loved.
This poignant rendering is sentimental and sad ~ with a delicate seasoning of hope. Well Crafted.

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by Amyfriend02/14/07

Past mistakes..

claw away at her inner emotions.. as she doubts her own worthiness in her lovers eyes.

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by Anonymous07/19/16

Good try, but ultimatly leaning dangrousely close to the uninspiring zone..

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