So his idea of running a company is to screw up the marriage of one of his employees in order to take revenge on a teenage girlfriend. I doubt that's what they teach at Harvard Business School.
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Anonymous01/17/17
Great for Your Return
So good to see you submitting again.
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Anonymous01/17/17
Lacking
Bob, I have had you on my favorites list and read all your stuff. But something was missing here and the story tended to wander. You are one of the best writers in this forum but this one lacked your style that I have come to respect over the years. Like your mind was someplace else when you wrote this. I say this to be constructive as even on your worst day, your command of the written word beats anything I could do.
I have read nearly all your stories. You have an excellent writing style. You have got to be one of the best writers on this site. I'm glad to see you posting again.
The same story you always write, except not as bad as some of them. You forgot some things. "My cheating hasn't affected you a bit. I give you all the loving you can handle." "Harder, fuck me harder." We can't forget the classic "fuck over me," either. When are you every going to learn, it's "Fuck me over." Maybe you can get those into your next stories.
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Anonymous01/17/17
Great to see you back
Hey twentyseven Hillary baby this is Literotica not Harvard Business school...... get over it......... she was a lair a cheat duplicitous and a manipulative bitch. She lost at the final post. Rob was none of those he led her on to think he was going to lay himself open to her manipulation but as in many of JPB's stories dignity and morality were the winners.
From the first meeting at the party she still treated him like shit and she not Rob allowed it to fuck her marriage over due to her guilt.
Not as polished as before JPB but I still gave it 5 stars
Seems like a lot of the new authors are into unreal relationships and wife swapping etc. They think if they write smut it's a good loving wife story. But their is nothing loving about the wives in their stories. Same with a lot of those commenting as well. All they want is porn and crappy writing as long as they can get their porn fix. It's gotten so I don't even read the stories any more but keep looking fo stories by the old reliable GOOD WRITERS. It was nice to see someone still writes good stories.
Why'd you kill her Bob? Judith and her dad could have groomed Rob for a top spot on the board. He still could have controlled Spencer's promotions. Then when the fateful hotel liaison resulted in that call from Nancy Rob could have really crushed her.
I can hear Rob now, "Nancy I'm not and have never been like you. I could never set aside my vows. I love my wife too much. But not to worry because Spence was to get the promotion anyway, and he got in spite of you."
I really came to like Judith and you killed her. Imagine at the retirement banquet where they name Spence. Nancy's in tears, but are they tears of joy or guilt? Judith is smiling happily. Rob's smiling too, he knows.
Not to worry though Bob. This story is still a five, but I'm just not like you. I could never kill one of my loving heroines, and I fell for Judith in a big way!
And any of your next stories will most certainly be fives. A story from you, as Knickie would say, "Is like a Hallmark."
What you don't do or say can often have the most impact. He got his point across, didn't compromise himself or the company, and left her to wonder about her past and present behaviour. Touché'.
I agree with Carvohi, Judith didn't need to die to make the story work. In fact the connection with Nance could have been shared with Judy, with there own relationship getting stronger. not sadder.
I've always liked your stories but this ended kind of weak. I agree with the others that his wife didn't have to die to make the rest of the story work.
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Anonymous01/17/17
Bob is back!
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Anonymous01/17/17
Too bad!
Too bad you turned him into a cum sucking queer in the first sex scene. That's when I stopped reading. 1*
@GrandPaM – I like your idea that she revealed her true self by offering herself instead of an apology.
@likebob – I thought of something similar, but that would just hurt her husband.
@carvohi – I like it! Even if Judith was in charge, he could have been Exec. VP or something, still putting him in charge of Nancy’s husband’s job.
Speaking of Judith, he was certainly willing, but technically, given her superior position, her coming on to him is classic sexual harassment!
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Anonymous01/17/17
Enjoyable, the characters all showed the true inner morals. He was angry for along time but dealt with it in a mostly reasonable way. He was a loyal companion and seems to be a fair boss. His dead wife was a very sweet aggressive happy go lucky woman and would have like a little background about him after his wife and father in laws death. Nancys hubby was just in an uncomfortable spot knowing his wife abused his now boss for a couple of years while she was dating another guy. They were young but it showed her for who she was and young or not that was really a low fucked up thing to do. Everyone knowing except him than him hearing it . Lastly Nancy was a manipulative bitch as a teenager and as it would seem a pig slut as a married woman. She was gonna fuck him , then he wanted more and she agreed. Lucky for her husband he has morals but I would of gave hubby his promotion but had him go to the hotel to see what his wife was going to do. She was pimping herself out .like a hooker. That's not helping her out her husband , that's making him look like a fool. Hubby should've asked to have his promotion held up caught her and filed for divorce. If she can just fuck a guy to further her hubbys career than what else is she capable of.
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Anonymous01/17/17
To (Too Bad)
If you really did stop reading the story at that point, you missed a pretty good story for a pretty dumb reason. If you have ever been eating pussy a couple days or so after you dumped a load in it, you have been a cum eater also your just not aware of it.
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Anonymous01/17/17
Good Story But
Good story but too many typo's. Could be a great story if you did not condense it so much.
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Anonymous01/17/17
Please Oh PLEEEZE (!!!!!!)
Don't be teasing us with the prospect of more BoB!
When I saw your name attached to a new story here, I said "OH SHIT!" so loud (I had headphones in, and was listening to music) that my wife had to come in from the other room to ask me what was wrong!
I really thought you had hung up the writing hat, and was just here lurking under the name HarryInVa commenting on other's stories.
HAH! That is a joke of course......
But seriously, I am looking forward to more.
Despite more typos than usual, I really like the twist here in (let's call it) a DIFFERENT type of revenge. I gave you full marks, well earned by your elder statesman status around here. I am not just being empty in the praise here because I was so happy to see your return to this forum. I really thought this story worked well on many of the various levels. I suppose you already know what you did good, or was lacking by now. But what is sure for any reader, the combination of those STILL somehow seems to work. Making a story WORK, that is the skillset that many of our newer contributors seem to fall short on. And even if this is a half attempt at polishing up something that you wrote long ago, we all must agree that there is simply still no substitute for experience.
JPB, I was glad when I saw a new story from you. You took a new twist to an uncomfortable situation.
I'm just wondering about the lack of editing, misspelled words, missing or wrong words, grammatical errors, just isn't the JPB whose stories I have read for years.
I'm going just chalk it up to being rusty and needing an editor after your sabbatical.
Welcome back and Please keep'm coming....
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Anonymous01/18/17
One of Your Best!
I have to say that I loved this story!!! Though, I was disappointed in him loosing this faithful, loving wife in a plane accident along with her father. He gets his revenge in a way that makes the point without being a total bastard about it. She knows what a deceptive slut she still is without compromising himself. I thought for a minute that he was going to take up her offer. Good keeping me holding on the line....
By the way, you need to get a proof reader. There are lots of duplicated words in some of the sentences. Still a very good story, if not perfectly written English...
Character lasts a lifetime. Time doesn't matter. Nancy was a shitty person. Rob should have seen that he was lucky not to be with her. For fun, he should have had Spenser meet Nancy at the hotel room. Then given him the promotion.
I'm surprised he could run a company, given his mind and being were frozen in high school days.
He painted for a picture of his late wife and late father in law to be impeccable, hard working, trustworthy, GROWN UP people. And the wife... wasn't she supposed to be an extraordinarily beautiful woman and wife, for over 6 years... But now that Nance, from high school days, turned up again, all he could do was lie in his big bed a night wondering what it'd be like to fuck her... or what it WOULD HAVE BEEN LIKED to fuck her back in high school, when she was leading him on, blah, blah, blah?
What a fuckin' idiot, this guy was..
That much, Nance was right about him.
On Nance, on the other hand.... as some others have said... she's really a shitty person. Blaming her shitty, deceitful, cheating personality on her teenage years wasn't going to make her a better, trustworthy person now. And it showed.
Too bad her husband, all told a very able worker and rising star in the company, was now going to be a casualty of these two idiotic teenagers...
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Anonymous01/19/17
Pretty Good
Pretty good story. 5 stars in today's market.
Maybe "even" with Nancy, but lost ground as a boss since he purposely infringed on valued employee Spencer's peace of mind (even if not his career) through comments to his wife. Better to keep it arms length.
Ironically, the one thing Spence -- some one Rob does like and value -- needs to know is his wife is a manipulator and slut for the right price. Yet there is no easy way for Rob to share that.
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Anonymous01/19/17
TOUCHED A NERVE
Much deeper to actually lose the love of his life than to just have some asshole take over the sex duties for you. That hurt.
But I agree, having Spence meet Nancy at the hotel would have been the perfect way to end the story. To see how she would have handled seeing her husband show up instead of the man she was going to whore herself out to could have seen the story go a couple of different ways and could have let us know whether she was doing it for misguided love for husband or whether she was just a money grabbing, status seeking whore.
Glad to see your name on a story. Thanks for sharing.
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Anonymous01/19/17
rob gets even
When where and how?
Certainly not in this story.
Someone somewhere gave me the impression you might not always go full out btb, but you at least balanced the scales.
So far-20 plus stories-you are more the moreau ukresearcher gerald mattblack etc kind of guy
But hey, you can string words together, your efforts are free except for expenditure of my time
That cost being exorbitant I will waste no more time and caution others about being spendthrifts when it comes to your efforts
Though I imagine lordslammydoo is enthralled-
So take heart
Good story Bob, surprising number of grammatical or typos for an otherwise well written story. I liked the way you ended the story...though Rob caused Nancy some discomfort his real revenge was showing that he was the "bigger man" so to speak.
Always liked your stories. Glad to see you still doing them- I guess Rob got a measure of revenge, but if her husband knew about his wife's "sacrifice" he would perhaps have enjoyed it more. The fact that he left her there made her feel like shit, it was a more subtle revenge. Probably better after all. She was right, though: the stupid selfish things people do in HS shouldn't really be held against them. I was dumped in high school and I went to my 25th reunion, where I saw her again (a middle aged frumpy woman, not the woman of my dreams). Having no shyness any more, I came up to her and said, "Grace, you broke my heart in high school". She responded, "I'm sorry, I was just a silly immature girl back then, and I didn't really know what I wanted". That was an acceptable answer.
Great tale. It was sad that our hero lost his wife. I'm glad that he didn't screw around with the possible cheating cunt wife of his underling. I just wish he would have showed him she was ready to cheat. Didn't take away from the tale, however.
English
How Mature
So his idea of running a company is to screw up the marriage of one of his employees in order to take revenge on a teenage girlfriend. I doubt that's what they teach at Harvard Business School.
Great for Your Return
So good to see you submitting again.
Lacking
Bob, I have had you on my favorites list and read all your stuff. But something was missing here and the story tended to wander. You are one of the best writers in this forum but this one lacked your style that I have come to respect over the years. Like your mind was someplace else when you wrote this. I say this to be constructive as even on your worst day, your command of the written word beats anything I could do.
Welcome back...
I have read nearly all your stories. You have an excellent writing style. You have got to be one of the best writers on this site. I'm glad to see you posting again.
Welcome back!
I've missed your stories!
Just plain meh
The same story you always write, except not as bad as some of them. You forgot some things. "My cheating hasn't affected you a bit. I give you all the loving you can handle." "Harder, fuck me harder." We can't forget the classic "fuck over me," either. When are you every going to learn, it's "Fuck me over." Maybe you can get those into your next stories.
Great to see you back
Hey twentyseven Hillary baby this is Literotica not Harvard Business school...... get over it......... she was a lair a cheat duplicitous and a manipulative bitch. She lost at the final post. Rob was none of those he led her on to think he was going to lay himself open to her manipulation but as in many of JPB's stories dignity and morality were the winners.
From the first meeting at the party she still treated him like shit and she not Rob allowed it to fuck her marriage over due to her guilt.
Not as polished as before JPB but I still gave it 5 stars
Nive to see s good story here
Seems like a lot of the new authors are into unreal relationships and wife swapping etc. They think if they write smut it's a good loving wife story. But their is nothing loving about the wives in their stories. Same with a lot of those commenting as well. All they want is porn and crappy writing as long as they can get their porn fix. It's gotten so I don't even read the stories any more but keep looking fo stories by the old reliable GOOD WRITERS. It was nice to see someone still writes good stories.
I loved it but...
You killed Judith!
Why'd you kill her Bob? Judith and her dad could have groomed Rob for a top spot on the board. He still could have controlled Spencer's promotions. Then when the fateful hotel liaison resulted in that call from Nancy Rob could have really crushed her.
I can hear Rob now, "Nancy I'm not and have never been like you. I could never set aside my vows. I love my wife too much. But not to worry because Spence was to get the promotion anyway, and he got in spite of you."
I really came to like Judith and you killed her. Imagine at the retirement banquet where they name Spence. Nancy's in tears, but are they tears of joy or guilt? Judith is smiling happily. Rob's smiling too, he knows.
Not to worry though Bob. This story is still a five, but I'm just not like you. I could never kill one of my loving heroines, and I fell for Judith in a big way!
And any of your next stories will most certainly be fives. A story from you, as Knickie would say, "Is like a Hallmark."
Jedd Clampett
I like the way he handled it
What you don't do or say can often have the most impact. He got his point across, didn't compromise himself or the company, and left her to wonder about her past and present behaviour. Touché'.
fantasy guy
I agree with Carvohi, Judith didn't need to die to make the story work. In fact the connection with Nance could have been shared with Judy, with there own relationship getting stronger. not sadder.
Could have been better
I've always liked your stories but this ended kind of weak. I agree with the others that his wife didn't have to die to make the rest of the story work.
Bob is back!
Too bad!
Too bad you turned him into a cum sucking queer in the first sex scene. That's when I stopped reading. 1*
More Thoughts
@GrandPaM – I like your idea that she revealed her true self by offering herself instead of an apology.
@likebob – I thought of something similar, but that would just hurt her husband.
@carvohi – I like it! Even if Judith was in charge, he could have been Exec. VP or something, still putting him in charge of Nancy’s husband’s job.
Speaking of Judith, he was certainly willing, but technically, given her superior position, her coming on to him is classic sexual harassment!
Enjoyable, the characters all showed the true inner morals. He was angry for along time but dealt with it in a mostly reasonable way. He was a loyal companion and seems to be a fair boss. His dead wife was a very sweet aggressive happy go lucky woman and would have like a little background about him after his wife and father in laws death. Nancys hubby was just in an uncomfortable spot knowing his wife abused his now boss for a couple of years while she was dating another guy. They were young but it showed her for who she was and young or not that was really a low fucked up thing to do. Everyone knowing except him than him hearing it . Lastly Nancy was a manipulative bitch as a teenager and as it would seem a pig slut as a married woman. She was gonna fuck him , then he wanted more and she agreed. Lucky for her husband he has morals but I would of gave hubby his promotion but had him go to the hotel to see what his wife was going to do. She was pimping herself out .like a hooker. That's not helping her out her husband , that's making him look like a fool. Hubby should've asked to have his promotion held up caught her and filed for divorce. If she can just fuck a guy to further her hubbys career than what else is she capable of.
To (Too Bad)
If you really did stop reading the story at that point, you missed a pretty good story for a pretty dumb reason. If you have ever been eating pussy a couple days or so after you dumped a load in it, you have been a cum eater also your just not aware of it.
Good Story But
Good story but too many typo's. Could be a great story if you did not condense it so much.
Please Oh PLEEEZE (!!!!!!)
Don't be teasing us with the prospect of more BoB!
When I saw your name attached to a new story here, I said "OH SHIT!" so loud (I had headphones in, and was listening to music) that my wife had to come in from the other room to ask me what was wrong!
I really thought you had hung up the writing hat, and was just here lurking under the name HarryInVa commenting on other's stories.
HAH! That is a joke of course......
But seriously, I am looking forward to more.
Despite more typos than usual, I really like the twist here in (let's call it) a DIFFERENT type of revenge. I gave you full marks, well earned by your elder statesman status around here. I am not just being empty in the praise here because I was so happy to see your return to this forum. I really thought this story worked well on many of the various levels. I suppose you already know what you did good, or was lacking by now. But what is sure for any reader, the combination of those STILL somehow seems to work. Making a story WORK, that is the skillset that many of our newer contributors seem to fall short on. And even if this is a half attempt at polishing up something that you wrote long ago, we all must agree that there is simply still no substitute for experience.
Thanks again, Bob,
So awesome to have you back!
Your Back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JPB, I was glad when I saw a new story from you. You took a new twist to an uncomfortable situation.
I'm just wondering about the lack of editing, misspelled words, missing or wrong words, grammatical errors, just isn't the JPB whose stories I have read for years.
I'm going just chalk it up to being rusty and needing an editor after your sabbatical.
Welcome back and Please keep'm coming....
One of Your Best!
I have to say that I loved this story!!! Though, I was disappointed in him loosing this faithful, loving wife in a plane accident along with her father. He gets his revenge in a way that makes the point without being a total bastard about it. She knows what a deceptive slut she still is without compromising himself. I thought for a minute that he was going to take up her offer. Good keeping me holding on the line....
By the way, you need to get a proof reader. There are lots of duplicated words in some of the sentences. Still a very good story, if not perfectly written English...
Good story & the pay back WAS Classy BUT...
it was high school.
Time to move on already.
Slips & dips
Hey JPB, just a comment on the slips within the story and i must add one of your best. Though the slips made reading a bit off! regards RR101
Character
Character lasts a lifetime. Time doesn't matter. Nancy was a shitty person. Rob should have seen that he was lucky not to be with her. For fun, he should have had Spenser meet Nancy at the hotel room. Then given him the promotion.
The guy just never grew out of his teenage years
I'm surprised he could run a company, given his mind and being were frozen in high school days.
He painted for a picture of his late wife and late father in law to be impeccable, hard working, trustworthy, GROWN UP people. And the wife... wasn't she supposed to be an extraordinarily beautiful woman and wife, for over 6 years... But now that Nance, from high school days, turned up again, all he could do was lie in his big bed a night wondering what it'd be like to fuck her... or what it WOULD HAVE BEEN LIKED to fuck her back in high school, when she was leading him on, blah, blah, blah?
What a fuckin' idiot, this guy was..
That much, Nance was right about him.
On Nance, on the other hand.... as some others have said... she's really a shitty person. Blaming her shitty, deceitful, cheating personality on her teenage years wasn't going to make her a better, trustworthy person now. And it showed.
Too bad her husband, all told a very able worker and rising star in the company, was now going to be a casualty of these two idiotic teenagers...
Pretty Good
Pretty good story. 5 stars in today's market.
Maybe "even" with Nancy, but lost ground as a boss since he purposely infringed on valued employee Spencer's peace of mind (even if not his career) through comments to his wife. Better to keep it arms length.
Ironically, the one thing Spence -- some one Rob does like and value -- needs to know is his wife is a manipulator and slut for the right price. Yet there is no easy way for Rob to share that.
TOUCHED A NERVE
Much deeper to actually lose the love of his life than to just have some asshole take over the sex duties for you. That hurt.
But I agree, having Spence meet Nancy at the hotel would have been the perfect way to end the story. To see how she would have handled seeing her husband show up instead of the man she was going to whore herself out to could have seen the story go a couple of different ways and could have let us know whether she was doing it for misguided love for husband or whether she was just a money grabbing, status seeking whore.
Good Read Bob****
Glad to see your name on a story. Thanks for sharing.
rob gets even
When where and how?
Certainly not in this story.
Someone somewhere gave me the impression you might not always go full out btb, but you at least balanced the scales.
So far-20 plus stories-you are more the moreau ukresearcher gerald mattblack etc kind of guy
But hey, you can string words together, your efforts are free except for expenditure of my time
That cost being exorbitant I will waste no more time and caution others about being spendthrifts when it comes to your efforts
Though I imagine lordslammydoo is enthralled-
So take heart
Nice to see you back on Lit.
To the previous annon you're a fkn idiot.
Like the ending,,,
Good story Bob, surprising number of grammatical or typos for an otherwise well written story. I liked the way you ended the story...though Rob caused Nancy some discomfort his real revenge was showing that he was the "bigger man" so to speak.
Stolid man
Always liked your stories. Glad to see you still doing them- I guess Rob got a measure of revenge, but if her husband knew about his wife's "sacrifice" he would perhaps have enjoyed it more. The fact that he left her there made her feel like shit, it was a more subtle revenge. Probably better after all. She was right, though: the stupid selfish things people do in HS shouldn't really be held against them. I was dumped in high school and I went to my 25th reunion, where I saw her again (a middle aged frumpy woman, not the woman of my dreams). Having no shyness any more, I came up to her and said, "Grace, you broke my heart in high school". She responded, "I'm sorry, I was just a silly immature girl back then, and I didn't really know what I wanted". That was an acceptable answer.
Nice
Great tale. It was sad that our hero lost his wife. I'm glad that he didn't screw around with the possible cheating cunt wife of his underling. I just wish he would have showed him she was ready to cheat. Didn't take away from the tale, however.
Five Stars
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