All Comments on 'Moonlight Serenade'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Blimey

I do hate this David.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Erotic Mistro~

I enjoyed your harmonious tale, the highs and lows were written with exellence. Great, Nude Day story...Good Luck (~_*)

cookiejarcookiejaralmost 20 years ago
I loved it...

A really beautiful story that shows what romance is all about. Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I do love piano music

I once made love to my sweetie at her piano. This brought back the best kinds of memories. ;)

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101almost 20 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story, very well done. I do have some nits to pick but I will include them on your thread.

comet123comet123over 19 years ago
Piano and Thunder

A beautifully done job on a sensual combination of nature's forces, thunder and music. Very enjoyable read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Sensual

i really enjoyed this read, very sensual language and texture to the whole piece.

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I'm a passionate amateur writer who doesn't have time to properly finish any of her work. Therefore I decided to fulfill my "quickie" fix, with a few naughty stories for here. Sometimes these are clips from books I never finish. Let me know what you think sometime.