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Blimey
I do hate this David.
Erotic Mistro~
I enjoyed your harmonious tale, the highs and lows were written with exellence. Great, Nude Day story...Good Luck (~_*)
I loved it...
A really beautiful story that shows what romance is all about. Good luck!
I do love piano music
I once made love to my sweetie at her piano. This brought back the best kinds of memories. ;)
Excellent
Excellent story, very well done. I do have some nits to pick but I will include them on your thread.
Piano and Thunder
A beautifully done job on a sensual combination of nature's forces, thunder and music. Very enjoyable read!
Sensual
i really enjoyed this read, very sensual language and texture to the whole piece.
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